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ONE HEARTBEAT

I remember that it was an ordinary day
When Life came and whispered low
Said, I know that you've been searching
And I'm gonna tell you where to go.

Life's words fell on me like sweet honey
Awed by her soothing touch of poetry
Son, there's a voice calling you to echo
Can you feel her tug to pair in melody

There's a kind of music that last forever
Seek that heartbeat.. perfect for you
Only one girl made to match your echo
In love.. one heartbeat comes from two

Sweet girl, please be my one heartbeat!

~Lyric Man

Note: My write is an echo to a poem "The Heatbeat Of Me" by an incredible writer here on the Soup, Brandy Nicole. Go check out her work.. you'll love it!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 8:13:00 PM
Heart touching beat of tge heart. Heartful.
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Date: 7/21/2018 3:26:00 AM
Lyric Man, such a heartwarming poem....
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Date: 7/15/2018 9:07:00 PM
There's a lot I like about this little poem but that last line is my favorite. It may even inspire a poem from me.
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Date: 7/15/2018 12:22:00 AM
Each stanza entreated the reader to continue, and you do not disappoint. The word that kept repeating in my mind was tenderness and how you let it flow.
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Date: 7/14/2018 12:53:00 PM
Your words speak with the power of life and love. Your mind set flows gently onto the page and we can relate with you and where your words lead us. A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being human and sharing the experience of love, intrinsic to our species. Emile.
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:45:00 AM
I find this piece a very nice write too.
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Date: 7/13/2018 2:50:00 PM
Just so magically romantic when two hearts beat as one! You're the real Lyric Man - some will imitate but they can't duplicate:-)! You just keep churning out these gems, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Well said. Yes your poem is inspiring!
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Date: 7/13/2018 9:54:00 AM
Superb...
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Date: 7/12/2018 12:14:00 PM
such a good poetry.. best wishes for you....
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Date: 7/12/2018 8:13:00 AM
I will check it out. Have a great day, great day, day, day, d a y......
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Date: 7/12/2018 7:19:00 AM
Fantastic!
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Date: 7/12/2018 4:39:00 AM
A beautifully penned echo poem, Lyric Man. And yes, Brandy is a wonderful writer. I love her poetry and have been a fan of hers from the moment she joined. PS. T.J
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Date: 7/12/2018 3:31:00 AM
Beautiful... You are absolutely right. The most beautiful music is a synchronize heartbeats...
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Date: 7/11/2018 11:08:00 PM
Hi, Lyric Man! I really love "The Heatbeat Of Me" by Brandy Nicole! You both sound so lyric, as one heartbeat!
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Date: 7/11/2018 9:49:00 PM
Your poems def have lyric to them Lyric Man. :)
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Date: 7/11/2018 8:22:00 PM
The line "Life came and whispered low" is intriguing. Is it synecdoche or personification? Let a debate rage on. Nice poem.
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Date: 7/11/2018 6:07:00 PM
Nicely done my friend. Beautifully worded. I know she is touched by this lovely tribute. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:41:00 PM
The music goes on for sure...It just has a different song sometimes...like mine, 3 times LOL Beautiful write Lyric Man!
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:25:00 PM
The end leaves me breathless. It is that last thought that truly melts me. The heart-beats of me, you can feel. Two hearts are beating as one, around these words. Which is very romantic and how love should always be. This is beautiful in every way. Thank you. I am still in awe. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/11/2018 4:16:00 PM
And the music plays on and on, blended within your beautiful Words, LM.
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Date: 7/11/2018 4:05:00 PM
Inspiring and romantic music of the heart that creates a symphony with only...a heartbeat dear, Lyric!
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Date: 7/11/2018 3:58:00 PM
This is very nice. It shows how inspiration can blend from one to another and create such beautiful creative work :)
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Date: 7/11/2018 3:50:00 PM
what sweet lyrics my friend, a lovely echo poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/11/2018 3:28:00 PM
It's magic when you find that right melody..to make music forever..when the echo is heard..well done, LM.
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