One Fine Morning

'Your troubles are all in your head' his young wife said One fine morning he got out of bed ~ to find her dead

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 4:25:00 PM

Oh my goodness! What? I have to read this a second time. Unexpected ending.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/19/2021 5:14:00 AM

A commentary on perspective I am feeling here GW! I try always to look at the glass as half full! ( and then reach for the gin!) Good One! Happy Friday!

Bill Baker

Date: 11/19/2021 12:10:00 AM

Now there's a wake up call. Short and to the point, Gershon Bill

Valsa George

Date: 11/18/2021 7:23:00 PM

This has happened in our neighbourhood ! So sad ! Life is so unpredictable. Without even a goodbye, many have to set out on the long journey ! Brief, yet holding so much of thoughts in this poem Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 8:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Valsa. Your generous comments on my poems sure do give me a lift! Much appreciated, Gershon