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’’’’’’’ ‘’ ‘ ‘’’ So many tales born in these walls, As dusk spills, my reverie recalls Grandma’s stories as rooftop tolls, While moon’s blue star listens and stalls In seasons past her chirp still crawls. Her gift of verse dripped like rainfall, Night walks where I gave her a shawl As reams of myth flowered the soul So many tales... How sadly I stroll as light befalls Her rhymes still dance on jeweled halls, The shawl now mine fragrant with scrolls Through her eyes, my prose become whole Lacing my pen dipped in raw squalls So many tales... ------------- Brian Strand Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/27/2012 1:24:00 PM
MIA?????
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:17:00 PM
NETTE, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in BRIAN'S' contest..... always~ PD
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Date: 7/26/2012 8:45:00 PM
pretty writting
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:38:00 PM
Great topic..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2012 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#191"contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 10:06:00 AM
Soo touching...evoking many memories, Nette....Big Congrrrrratts!! on your win!! :) well done, love you bunches, deb
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:53:00 PM
I just love this form, Nette and you did it so well. BIG congratulations.
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:42:00 PM
A wonderful, sentimental write, Nette, and a beautiful tribute to your beloved grandmother. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:28:00 PM
Wow super nette a rondeau in monorhyme...Lovely winning write congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:19:00 PM
Nette, congrats on another splendid win..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:28:00 PM
Your work is inspiring, Nette...always a pleasure...Congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on another great win Nette. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win.
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:17:00 AM
A really beautiful and moving poem. Congrats.
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:16:00 AM
congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 4/24/2012 1:59:00 PM
I wonder? It does seem all Grandmothers are wonderful? Yours and mine certainly were! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:45:00 AM
Nice tribute to her. I like your descriptions. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/23/2012 8:16:00 AM
Beautifully penned Nette. Congratulations
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Childhood Memory" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:23:00 AM
Good Rondeau Nette. Congrats on your win.One Love~O.O.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful write Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful memories and a beautiful poem. Congratulations Nette
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your 3rd place win.I loved it 1st time around.
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