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On Your Path

Walking leisurely On your path myself I found, Asked if still your heart Kept love's treasure once we shared Our happiness to build now! © Demetrios Trifaitis 23 JANUARY 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2015 6:36:00 PM

I'm sure your heart will provide her with ample building material.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/23/2015 9:23:00 AM

Loved your Tanka Demetrios..inspiring>regards: Rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/23/2015 10:40:00 AM

My friend, Rajat, pleased to see you! Thank you for your lovely comment!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2015 7:43:00 AM

A lovely query and inquiry into love's treasure, Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/23/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Ram, for your comment and kind visit!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/23/2015 5:48:00 AM

Hello Demetrios! Very beautiful romantic pen! I really enjoyed this very nice and sweet tanka of yours my dearest friend Demetrios. A solid 7 plus from me! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D. ^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/23/2015 7:01:00 AM

Dorian, you so kind! Thank you for your kind visits and comments plus your generous grading! Hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/23/2015 3:41:00 AM

Oh, my dear poet. I love to read romantic writes from you. It has been quite a long long time since you have written of love and romance. I'm pleased to read this beautiful write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/23/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thank you dear, Eileen! Your visit and comment, well appreciated! I take a break!