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On Wings of Mystic Endeavors

On wings of mystic endeavors Sun kissed, this distant land beckons, uncharted waters adrift on whispers of solitude wishes Floating silently upon pastel blue sky destinies, my eyes search the heavens for but a glimpse of euphoria Soaring high like souls afloat on summer breezes, my mind wafts in the beauty that only comes in a dream Though as my heart does fly on wings of mystic endeavors and the planets align in curved formation, my eternal love, seeks only you Good night Soupers

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 AM

My eternal love seeks only you...A very profound statement...Eternal love is a beautiful thing if only it exists...Beautiful poem

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 12:20:00 PM

Well, it certainly does in poetry. :) Thanks so very much Charmaine. Your wonderful comments always make me smile

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/7/2017 9:51:00 AM

Hi Chris, What a lovely and beautiful way to say good night: -) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 10:05:00 AM

Thanks again my friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you send my way.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/7/2017 7:22:00 AM

Captivating expressions dancing under the watchful eyes of your Muse dear, Chris! A big 7 my friend!

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/7/2017 5:50:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. Are you ever out of poetic expressions. May they continue to flow for you and your readers. Even the title is poetic with imagery. You allow your reader to fly. Honestly. Have a wonderful morning Chris. Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:14:00 AM

I'm sure someday they may run dry but for now I'll just keep dipping into that poetic well. Thank you Lisa so very much. Your comments are always so kind and encouraging

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2017 5:01:00 AM

:) What devotion...what love...what beauty. Great write.

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eileen for your nice thoughts on my poem.

Darren White

Date: 4/7/2017 12:44:00 AM

"my eyes search the heavens // for but a glimpse of euphoria" // I am always in love with the way you turn to the sky at some time during the evening. Maybe because it's what I do too, creating my poems at night. I love the soft use of s alliteration, and the poem as a whole is a warm goodnight wish. Sleep well, my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thanks so very much my good friend, I appreciate you and the nice thoughts you always send my way.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/6/2017 9:23:00 PM

:) always a pleasure to read Chris, goodnight! xomo

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen. I am happy you enjoy my poetry

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/6/2017 8:20:00 PM

Your poetry lifts the mind and soothes the soul. Thank you for these beautiful lines :) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne Marie, your kind thoughts are always a wonderful gift for me.

White Wolf

Date: 4/6/2017 7:37:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your work, Chris! And this is no exception! Great stuff, mate!

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so very much WW. I appreciate your visits to my poetry

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/6/2017 6:02:00 PM

As your mind wafts in the beauty that comes only in a dream, I wish you sweet dreams of another lovely poem.

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend for all of your kind thoughts.