On the See-Saw

I ride in art's paradox- feeling inner life then outer reality as expressionism absorbs impressionism

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Date: 12/6/2008 4:46:00 PM

Brian as I always tell you especially this one clever clever and clever. Beautiful choice of words great insight. Michael

Date: 12/6/2008 1:18:00 PM

wow, very profound Brian, I really loved this one about you. awesome bio - well suited to an awesome man. Love, Kristin

Date: 12/6/2008 12:56:00 PM

I had to think about this one for awhile. Love the last line. Also clever arrangement. BG

Date: 12/6/2008 9:24:00 AM

Yes..a juggling act! I sometimes prefer the "inner life"!! Guess that means I'm a dreamer? Well done, again, Brian! ~ Carrie

Date: 12/6/2008 9:24:00 AM

Great bio, Brian. I love the image of riding it "art's paradox"......... Marjorie, I mean, Sean, you're too funny! ~Juliane

Date: 12/6/2008 9:08:00 AM

I think Sean wants to ride the roller coaster and not the see saw. Excellent. God Bless Phyl

Date: 12/6/2008 8:07:00 AM

This is a real roller-coaster piece , Brian ... Rgds. Marjorie Daw ....