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On the Other Side

` From a weary weathered beach I watch the sunset fade beneath angry wintered seas drowning possibilities of another moonlit night washing up on shore and still I go on, for what calls can not be heard, it must be felt…and I feel it Vivid reflections falter atop a jet stream heated from below, chilled from above, willing feats of great wandering when raindrops licked old wounds and footprints became yesterday’s puddles Forgotten mariners, ghostly silhouettes cling to ancient dreams, shadows swimming the deep hollows, elusive treasures swallowed by the disturbed mire, swirling in slipknot patterns and anchor chains apparitions, as I now brace against a frigid wind, traversing dunes and snow fence barriers, heading towards the light, a flickering lone candle left in the bay window, a signal that her love still awaits, and my heart warms as I approach the beauty I have so longed, on the other side of a blue weathered door…

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Date: 1/31/2020 6:56:00 PM
what a beautiful poem... i am glad you entered it in Brian's contest so it would turn up as a top winner and i would in turn get to see it... Congratulations Chris... :)
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Date: 4/30/2017 12:25:00 PM
Good Afternnon Chris. Oh my goodness. I am in poetic awe reading this expression. Is there no end to your talent for this craft we call poetry. Please allow me to let your words stand for there is nothing I could add. You know how to melt the heart of your readers. You are amazing Mr. Poet. Well done completely and entirely and then some.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:37:00 AM
Lisa, your kindness always brings the biggest smile to me face. Thank you, thank you, thank you for these nice thoughts on my poem. I truly appreciate you my friend.
Date: 4/30/2017 5:50:00 AM
Very romantic Chris, "on the other side of the blue weathered door", absolutely love it . A 7++.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much Maria. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 4/29/2017 9:02:00 AM
Amazing, Chris, you blow me away with your wordy description:) a 7:)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jo for your always kind words.
Date: 4/29/2017 5:27:00 AM
I cannot help but think you save your best poems (jk) for those Fridays while you say nothing happens then. But we, the lucky few reading poetry on Friday, enjoy this immensely. This is art, my friend, finest art ever. You paint images for us with words.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:36:00 AM
Whatever... :) Thanks so much Darren, I always appreciate your visits and the kindness you show to me.
Date: 4/28/2017 9:59:00 PM
It is a fabulous poem that stays with you and I like to think that, if Turner were still alive, he would have been very happy to paint the incredible scene you described. A favorite with me:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie for your wonderful thoughts on my poem. Your nice comments are a beautiful painting to me.
Date: 4/28/2017 9:42:00 PM
Great writing Chris raindrops licked old wounds, and footprints became yesterdays puddles, wow!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 4/28/2017 3:21:00 PM
I hope that flickering candle will always show you the way to her door...Beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much my traveling friend.

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