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Lived on this farm in my 5th year, when my mom returned to Iowa with FOUR girls(the fourth one still in her tummy!) after having divorced my father back in Wa state. My grandparents were both deceased by the end of the 80's. The farm got sold years ago and does not resemble the same place any more! Such treasured memories from that farm.

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On Grandpa’s farm we rose to summer’s light, then stayed outside – sometimes till dark of night. There was a gated big front yard and tree and hollyhocks, so pretty, growing free. Behind the house there was a tool shed and some old machines with which to till the land. Unused were they, and I recall one day we sat on one of them while at our play. A swarm of bees rose up. I swear they chased us unrelentingly as home we raced! Except for that one incident, our days were wonderful! On soft grass we would laze. There was a lane that we’d go walking down. It led to an old road, which led to town. We picked soft pussywillows on that lane. Raspberries too – which gave our grins a stain! Long gone is Grandpa’s farm where we once stayed and Grandpa too. . . but feelings never fade. An oldie for Janice Canerdy's Rhyming Couplets Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/1/2021 7:42:00 PM
sounds so idyllic...congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/27/2021 9:18:00 PM
Great imagery and feelings , Andrea, good memories. Congratulations in Janice Canerdy's couplets contest.
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Date: 5/26/2021 11:11:00 AM
Another win for this delightful memoir poem, Andrea. Congratulations! Memories of your grandfather's farm reminds me of summers spent at my grandparents summer house. Thanks for the memories!
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Date: 5/25/2021 10:35:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win in my contest, Andrea. Thanks for entering! Janice
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:20:00 PM
Nice Andrea
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Date: 5/8/2020 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Good memories are the best. I love where you say, "but feelings never fade." So very true. Have a wonderful weekend and enjoy your win.....
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Date: 5/8/2020 3:32:00 PM
This memories Surely Linger Longer Bravo Andrea
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Date: 5/8/2020 9:40:00 AM
What a wonderful memory Andrea. Loved your perspective on this, written through a child’s memory so well I heard your voice speaking the words!
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Date: 5/8/2020 1:35:00 AM
Hello Andrea … nostalgia is so heart warming but sad when so called progress steamrolls a world no longer understood - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 5/5/2020 11:16:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Dear Heart's contest, Andrea - I hope you and yours are staying safe and sound. Blessings and keep up the great writing, My Friend! :o) <3
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Date: 5/5/2020 7:05:00 PM
Andrea, excellent, congratulations on your win in my contest. I enjoyed your poem so much, it brought back memories of my grandfathers farm_ Constance
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Date: 5/5/2020 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your excellent wonderful win in Dear Heart's contest. A Beautiful poem, our stained smiles in Africa are Mulberry smiles. Well penned my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/5/2020 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. On your medal winning contest entry. This compelling work would come first in any competition. A delightful masterpiece with divine imagery and narrative. Howard
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Date: 5/5/2020 1:36:00 AM
Some memories linger longer This is one Of such Goes In My Fav Right away it plastered on me
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Date: 5/4/2020 4:35:00 PM
Haven't though of hollyhocks in years. We had plenty as I was growing up. Your piece reminds me of going to my aunt's farm. A grand read with so much familiarity. Congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 5/4/2020 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Dear Heart’s contest, Andrea, nice memories. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/4/2020 10:16:00 AM
So charming, nostalgic and bucolic. Definitely a page in the scrapbook of your life. Brings to mind my grandma's home in Oregon. Loved the stained raspberry smiles... for us it was blackberries. Well done and a big congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 5/4/2020 6:24:00 AM
So glad you outran those bees! The days of running on a farm! Nothing like it, especially in Iowa! Great memories this brought back to me Andrea.
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Date: 5/3/2020 2:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Andrea--nostalgia at its very BEST. Janice
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Date: 5/3/2020 2:07:00 AM
Some bright spark did author a quote. Only things that stay the same never change, or the other way around. The meaning is the same. There is no way I will never return to the areas of my childhood, progress has obliterated all I knew. Later on in my youth on cattle stations in North Queensland as a stockman, all is still the same, except for the bikes instead of horses. 60 years later, many of the people are still alive. Friendship.
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Date: 5/3/2020 2:01:00 AM
A beautiful poem Andrea, rhyming and flowing, right up my street. Wonderful.
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Date: 5/2/2020 8:37:00 PM
Unforgettable memories mingling with yesterday's experience like rain drops falling into a river. A very touching piece of poetry Andrea. You have such a beautiful heart my friend. Love and hugs.
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Date: 5/2/2020 5:30:00 PM
Such a lovely tale of sweet memories in the country Andrea, makes me remember too of childhood growing in the Scottish countryside where my dad worked on a farm such freedom then enjoyed. Thanks for bringing back my memories too. Keep safe and well , Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/2/2020 1:04:00 PM
Ahhh the serene country scene ... what a wonderful playground it is for little kids. So much magic. I loved this one. While I never grew up on a farm, my grandma certainly had her share of wonderful plants in the backyard: three apple trees, three gooseberry bushes, plum trees, grave-vines and blackberry bushes. Now that old homestead is sold and the current resident brought it all down to just bare dirt (at least the memories of it are sweet and alive). PS. surprised that plant wasn't censored!
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Date: 5/2/2020 9:26:00 AM
I loved my Grand parents farm. I wish we had spent more time there. This piece brought a smile to my face. Hugs Rick.
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