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On Blue In White

This is winter end, a season nice Woodland smiles free from ice Tastier is your sugar and spice That too without too big a price Still the flowers are thinking twice To bloom or no what’s the advice Warmth of summer yet to arise A month away the spring paradise Some inkling still in many a slice Of sun on Anemones that entice Strife of our life in bread and rice Evening dates with lovely fireflies Our cats are more after the mice Your pink clouds do mesmerize On blue in white the light writes All the apples crumble in a trice _________________________________ 11/02/2017

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Date: 2/21/2017 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win. Great monorhyme.
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:53:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir.
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:53:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:43:00 PM
what lovely imagery and rhyme Probir:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:54:00 AM
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Date: 2/18/2017 9:12:00 PM
Lovely, Probir! Congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:07:00 PM
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:26:00 PM
Very good Monorhyme, Probir, congratulations on your win :) hug Eve
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:08:00 PM
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Date: 2/14/2017 2:18:00 PM
I like this, Probir, very imaginative. // Barry
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:16:00 AM
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Date: 2/11/2017 9:46:00 PM
I do not know this form well, but the poem flowed so well, and I simply enjoyed this poem! ( evening I am shivering in -15c weather!!)
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:04:00 PM
My goodness ... _15! ... I cannot even imagine ! ... Thank you for liking my poem ...
Date: 2/11/2017 12:53:00 PM
Softly written, Probir, in a difficult form...
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie for your visit and like ...
Date: 2/11/2017 10:22:00 AM
Joyful poem of daring spring my friend, Probir! I love Anemones a Greek name that means "flowers of the wind" which this year are late to come in Greece! Lovely poem my friend!
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:08:00 PM
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Date: 2/11/2017 8:44:00 AM
Very nice Probir ! :)
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:11:00 PM
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:00:00 AM
delighted by the colorful interplay of your words, probir..huggs
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you, nette ...

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