On Any Given Day

"on any given day"

on any given day you're there
with endless focus shown to me
I see it hear it I know it
only you fulfill such dreams
unveil the all of me

on any given day I'm there
with everlasting reflections
you see it hear it you know it
one glance one whisper one touch
unveiled are you

on any given day we are there
with eternal love beyond the moon
shining luminous divine grace
the outside world is left behind
unfolding a life for you and me


SkyWatcher
02-02-22

just a little early valentine's day entry
then again valentine's day and the month of february is each day
thank you
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Sambourne Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 7:48 PM
Hello Lisa, I like the way you use repetition in your poem for emphasis. The line "on any given day" conveys an eternity of togetherness - a beautiful sentiment to cherish. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian
Ricci Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 3:01 AM
Good Morning Brian. Thank you very much. It's very nice to meet you. I appreciate your most generous and gracious review to which I never take for granted. Thank you also for mentioning repetition because I am told over and over that repetition does not belong in poetry but I can be stubborn and still utilize it (smile). May all know of love. Have a wonderful morning. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup as well.
Baker Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 2:06 PM
I have a feeling that every day is a happy valentine's day at your house. :-) Thanks for sharing your uplifting love poem with us, Lisa. Bill
Ricci Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Dear Bill, first I am sorry for this late response. I am smiling at your most wonderful and generous commentary. Thank you for that. Where would be all be and what would our homes be without love. I don't want to think... As always, it is I who truly thanks you. Have a wonderful afternoon. Stay well and I will see you very soon on your page. Take care
Mcconnell Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Lovely penned piece Lisa, such good imagery and insightfulness. A joy to read upon. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon
Ricci Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 3:14 AM
Hello Gordon - I'm so sorry for this late response. Thank you for such a graceful comment that enhances the entry itself. Have a wonderful day. Blessings back to you, thank you for that as well. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup.
DiMino Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 9:04 AM
This is perfectly lovely! Leaves me speechless, lost for words...so, I will just read again and bask in such light sublimely, divinely revealed. "with eternal love beyond the moon shining luminous divine grace" Wow! Joe.
Ricci Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Good Moring Joe. Hi. It is now my turn to say wow and to say I am speechless. Truly. Never do I take words or reviews for granted good bad or indifferent. I am honored by such a generous review. Truly. Thank you ever so much. May all know of love. May this day find you well. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup as well.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Your wonderful poem celebrates love in its highest form Lisa. Though I am now a widow my memories keep me warm. Blessings xxoo
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 4:05 PM
Hi Connie. I always say I am a believer in love and that may all know of love even for a moment. So yes, even though your husband is no longer physically with you thank goodness for the memories for as you say to keep you warm. Healthy memories can be a beautiful thing. Remain safe and I will return to your page very soon. Love and Blessings always.
Deo Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 5:28 AM
U are right. Amen to love of this "soul communicating" kind. Lisa, Wendy is a widow, was in ministry in this tough township & she is my Valentine since 2020. Best wishes to your significant other. I know he helped/ helps with dads passing on. Shalom shalom shalOm. Yes, Namasthe too
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Dear Anil - Hi. With seeing this comment and your name I hope it means your conditions are improving ever so slightly even if it just means power. You and those with you continue to be in my thoughts for better living conditions starting with clean water... It makes me very happy to see your comment of your valentine Wendy. As a believer in love for everyone and yes as a valued friend that pleases me and warms the heart for your happiness. Truly. And yes, my friend has been extraordinary and supportive for such a long time to which I am forever grateful and he knows it. Thank you for that. Please continue to be safe healthy and much more... With love and blessings always Shalom Shalom Shalom Namaste Namaste Namaste (smile)
Horsman Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Wow love this poetry Lisa, unveil of me and you are gems of a line also. Should fair well in the contest, sure hope so.
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Top of the morning to you hh. Hi. Thank you ever so much. Never do I take your visits or commentary for granted. Truly. This isn't a contest entry, however I do thank you for the vote of confidence for that thought. May all know of love. Have a wonderful morning with blessings and safety. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile)
M  Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 4:16 PM
Beautiful Lisa very much in love it sounds like! Debx
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:31 AM
Good Morning Deb. Thank you very much as always. Truly. May all know of love and a healthy love at that. Have a wonderful morning and day. (smile)
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Very romantic verse Lisa, its a a happy celebration. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:17 AM
Good Morning Tom - Hi. Thank you very much. I very much like your commentary and intake for love is always a happy celebration. Thank you for that. Have a wonderful morning and day. Remain safe. Blessings always. (smile)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 10:54 AM
That is romance in its best form. Strange I never bothered about Valentine Day. For me my wife was always Valentine Day.
Ricci Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:16 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you Victor. Truly. Yes, I imagine each day with you wife was always valentine's day as it was for my parents as well. True love stories... Have a day filled with beauty peace health and much more. Love and Blessings to you always. Remain safe please.
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