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On a Ship To Endpoint Isle

I am sailing on a ship to Endpoint Isle The waves are fierce very high Blown by a wind has flecked and scarred the deck With folds like dried old skin A gull plummets down then up Thrust sky-high alike a crumpled page of yesterday's news I've dizzy-staggered to the cabin where stands our captain All in white his face testament to completion I would be put ashore and this request on tongue-tip But somehow all is as should be I stand at last resigned Watch the roiling sea The journey now seems endless with little let-up Save moments when the waves beat back upon themselves And when the salt air stings I know that I am still alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/7/2010 3:43:00 PM
this is very creative, Dave, I can gather the man is to be exiled there to endpoint Isle? That's a good title for this great poem about a man who has "resigned" himeself to sure fate! LUv, andrea
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:07:00 AM
Daver, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:52:00 AM
Sometimes we just have to go with the flow. Much to ponder in this evokative write, my friend. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/7/2009 3:26:00 PM
Congrats Dave-r on your featured poem. i took the journey with you. BG
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this well writte poem being featured this week. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to take us on the journey with you. So much depth here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Way to go! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week Daver, a wonderful write and as i mentioned below, i love poems about the water >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:45:00 AM
Priceless Mr. Austin !,....to be in your shoes for this write,...I felt the winds !!! Great piece,..and Congratulations on your feature ! james
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:36:00 AM
What an amazing poem....those last lines...are so profound. Congratulations on this well deserved featured piece. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:29:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Marycile.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/26/2009 3:32:00 PM
I love poems of the water Daver, and this is another nice write, James
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Date: 7/19/2008 6:05:00 AM
Incredible write. Imagery so powerful I started feeling a little sea-sick. Just kidding. Powerful meaning behind your words. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/19/2008 3:40:00 AM
YES! This is still our biggest dream - sailing around the world where you TRULY know that you are LIVING LIFE!!! Yes! Great poem my friend, very inspiring. :) Love Kristin
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Date: 7/18/2008 8:41:00 PM
I loved the way this poem ended - very well done - blessings
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Date: 7/18/2008 4:29:00 PM
Excellent write, love the adventures on the open sea...Always, Christy
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