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On a Dull Day

When looking out her window She noticed the day was dull No sunshine shining brightly The ground is covered with snow While she looked at the snow She noticed that it was not tedious It was not as bad as she thought She was content with the day She realized that the sun Does not always shine Dull days come out to Then changes to brightness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/4/2022 4:26:00 AM
An amazing thought...There is always light in the darkest part it's just the matter of time we look for it... A great pen! Have a great day :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2022 6:23:00 AM
Hello Komal, so nice to met you. Yes there is always a light at the end of the darkness. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 3/10/2021 6:37:00 PM
The snow is so pristinely white and sparkly, it makes the world lovely. Exactly!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 6:00:00 AM
Hello Caren, when the snow spreads on the ground it is lovely. It is like white icing on a huge cake. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/27/2021 1:18:00 PM
You have a lovely mind.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2021 10:06:00 AM
Hello Kim, thank you. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/26/2021 11:01:00 AM
Ah but you can make a dull day bright just by doing something you like to do or by doing something FOR someone. Just because the sun is hiding you don't have to be a gray and the day. Good stuff here. God Bless, JB
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2021 11:43:00 AM
Hello Judy, you are right doing something for someone would brighten their day. Thank you for the lovely comment. God Bless. Darlene.
Date: 2/26/2021 4:17:00 AM
True.. Guess what, we are having a beautiful rainy down out here... It rained cats and dogs... Clouds are still very heavy. But I am not going out. I am in my blanket. Lol
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2021 11:48:00 AM
Hello Paghunda, Rain is good for the earth, gardens and flowers. I think you are in for a very rainfall where you live. Does the rain make you feel sleepy? Under your blanket,lol.Well enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/24/2021 9:17:00 PM
Hey, its a very creative one, I like it very much..keep up the creative work!! all the best! take care!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2021 10:06:00 AM
Hello Dili D. Wijegunasekara,I will thank you Dilu.I hope all is well with you. You also take care my friend.
Date: 2/23/2021 9:39:00 AM
If we live like the lady in your poem,we will be always happy. Wonderful write Darlene. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/23/2021 3:54:00 PM
Hello Rama, yes that is true. Yet not everyone is happy with the day starting out. "Oh it is toohot"! Or :It is too cold"! etc. enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/21/2021 3:30:00 AM
Darlene I love this wonderful free verse! There is always a glimmer of hope in life however grim!! love it!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2021 11:44:00 AM
Hello Krish, thank you Krish, for wonderful comment. Yes there is always a glimmer of hope. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/20/2021 4:18:00 PM
I have learned to accept any kind of day as long as I have lived to see it. Good write.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2021 4:37:00 PM
Hello Robert Pettit, Robert that goes to show that you accept any type of day no matter what it is like. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/20/2021 9:08:00 AM
Right you are Darlene. Here in Alberta we have a saying, "If you don't like the weather, wait a minute." Here in Alberta the weather is changeable and it can happen suddenly. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2021 4:35:00 PM
Hello Judy ,oh ! the weather changes in a minute in Alberta.! Wow! Unreal! Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/19/2021 7:50:00 PM
On dull days, the sunshine must come from inside you. Your excellent poem is a reminder to count one's blessings, Darlene. Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2021 4:32:00 PM
Hello Evelyn, yes on a dull day the sunshine must come from within. Yes we must count our blessings to. Best wishes Evelyn.
Date: 2/19/2021 3:12:00 PM
what a wonderful surprise it is when the sun comes out and as a gift. Love your grateful spirit dear poet. thank you Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/19/2021 3:23:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose, yes it is a wonderful surprise when the sun comes out. Our days can not all be sunshine. Thank you Mystic Rose Rose. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/19/2021 5:25:00 AM
- It's true ... the sun can not always shine ... a lovely poem, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/19/2021 10:38:00 AM
Hello sunshine Smile, right , the sun can not always shine . the snow on the grond does brighten the dy in its own way. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/18/2021 1:10:00 PM
A fine verse, that is wonderfully positive,Darlene! Brightness and dullness are two sides of the same coin. Glad you reminded us of that! Hugs,Pangie
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/18/2021 3:35:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, thank you for the lovely comment. Yes it is positive. Hugs Darlene xx
Date: 2/18/2021 8:34:00 AM
Wow an awesome poem inspiring positivity in dull days. Yet snow is exotic for us we'd be bouncing if we saw snow. The muse is beautiful to read . Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 2/18/2021 10:08:00 PM
Noh we have the mildest winters here in Tanzania, and the rest of seasons too though autumn isn't that noticeable. We mostly seem to have forever springs and summer. Winter is an exotic foreign season for us.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/18/2021 11:06:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri, hi! PlZ I will read your poetry. Do you have winter where you are? I live in Canada and we have 4 seasons. Do you? Enjoy your day my frend.

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