On a Cold Frosty Night

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On this cold frosty night so dark and still
I hear a rustle at my window sill
Is it my long lost lover, come to call?
A stray dying leaf, that dropped in the fall?
Or a mouse seeking ease from winter’s chill?

They’re vermin, I know, but I could not kill
The poor little beast. I hope that he will
Find a safe place, in a barn or a wall
On this cold frosty night

Some crumbs I may accidentally spill
That a hungry wee mouse may eat his fill
But then again, although he’s only small
I can’t have him running over the hall
Because if he did my screams would be shrill
On this cold frosty night
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encouraged by Andrea. :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on your work being featured on homepage..I really like the flow, rhythm, and rhyme of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Sara
Roske Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Love it!! They are cute little things from a distance. Congrats on being featured this week.
Austin Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 2:50 PM
Yes! Wee mousy - stay outa my housy. I like your humor. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:49 PM
Congrats Margaret on your rondeau being featured.
Horsman Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 4:21 AM
love this, Margaret. one can feel the words as one reads this. harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Margaret, I was searching for another poem of yours to comment on! which led me to your page two and I recalled this one you credited me for inspiration.It's so cute. have you done others since? Oh, I have up now how to calculate your numbers.Thanks so much for commenting and I hope you will finish the process over there at my blog. LUv ya,Andrea
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January 19, 2010 at 1:10 AM
Very cute, Margaret. Mice are also very cute... but they can be destructive with their gnawing. And they do bring on screams of fright, which in turn frighten them from the halls. You did a nice job with this rondeau. I think I'll write a rodent poem, too. LOL About their gnawing... in a few days... maybe (Also thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Smiling, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:59 PM
ps By the way, I just noticed I used chill in the beginning of MY rondeau. how funny. I didn't even intend to do the same as you. thanks for reading mine, and I will go see another of yours now.
Guzzi Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:28 PM
LOL do you know Robert Burns wrote a "cool verse" to a mouse! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:06 AM
I have just read Andrea's poem, and now yours. How wonderful to encourage each other, and both poems are wonderful!! Well done! ~ Carrie
George   Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 11:00 PM
I haven't tried one of this as yet. Now I am encouraged. You did a magnificent job, Margaret. Love, Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:47 PM
YEAHHHH!! You did a rondeau!!! was it your first? Because this looks just too good to be a first!! and you know what, I've been challenged to do a rondeau myelf, on winter , so I really should be inspired by YOU now and give it a try (even though I've done winter ones before)Great job, Margaret and now I gotta get off here. The crazy man in my opera is getting home from driving truck all day! Luv, andrea
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