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On a Clearing Morning

On a clearing morning I awaken, yesterday’s ruckus subsiding; corporal tensions having been slept away, a dove softly cooing on my window sill in the flower box having made a nest – room for both buds and nurturing… the cat at bay, the pane a permanent divider, every night he awakes to consciously dream, eyes like fixed lasers, into the dawn he salivates, wonders of our shared mystery, why the mouthful and he separated, by the same God who pets and soothes, calls him precious…recalling the turkey they shared – dispatched, tastefully presented as grace…?

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Date: 11/7/2023 3:25:00 AM
A beautiful morning with all ruckus and tensions subsiding, a dove cooing and the cat with laser eyes looking beyond the pane....! Wonders of shared mystery. Love trhe image of the dove that has made a nest in the flower box...... "room for both buds and nurturing….....!" I am down with fever after a trip. Still enjoyed your poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/7/2023 3:38:00 PM
Sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Chicken soup...and cuddles are a must. Wishing you lots of tender caring. I thought your brilliant pen was unusually quiet lately. Blessings and speedy recovery!
Date: 11/6/2023 4:00:00 PM
life's contradictions coupled with hope...seems like there's some questioning happening in these words, especially in the last two lines...left me breathless. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/6/2023 4:42:00 PM
So little is understood of beginning Christianity, that Christ taught mysticism -- mystic oneness with God. Popes, religion for the sake of control, having greatly watered-down, distorted truth. Don't believe our present Pope -- very suspicious of him, as though he were being blackmailed into progressive compliance. But what does an uninformed, simple fool like me know. Really nothing outside of gut.
Date: 11/6/2023 9:09:00 AM
There are always contradictions Joe, as life Will ever surprise and comfort, horrify and Placate..' Well put lines my friend.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/6/2023 9:25:00 AM
Contradictions never ending for sure; thank you, Joe. Blessings.
Date: 11/6/2023 6:42:00 AM
A lovely write. Each day is a new day. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/6/2023 6:51:00 AM
Hope is reborn with each new dawn's opportunity. Thank you, Paula; blessings!
Date: 11/6/2023 6:40:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem with a lot of happy thoughts. Thank you.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/6/2023 6:56:00 AM
Hi Hilda; thank you. Hope you had a wonderful weekend. Blessings!

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