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Olive eloi

There is a girl, Olive_eloi
Who is in love with a Pinoy
She wants to tell him what she feels
But loses out kicking her heels.


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Written 18th May 2014
Contest: A Clerihew - and Make it New! 
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2014 3:31:00 PM
She is a dear! Lovely write for a lovely person.
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2014 7:09:00 PM
Thank you for the visit Eileen; Olive_eloi is one of the sweetest girls around. Now I have to go and read a certain sonnet that a friend of mine has written about a lady friend of mine:)) Goodnight...it's past my bedtime! (2.10am) // paul
Date: 6/12/2014 4:42:00 PM
Dear Paul, now I'm having to go farther down your lists to find poems I haven't read. This is adorable and I bet the Soup's own "Olive" felt honored by this witty tribute. Love, Carolyn
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/12/2014 5:19:00 PM
Hi Carolyn...thank you for the endless support I receive from you:) A Clerihew is supposed to be written with a vip in mind, but I could not resist writing one for soup's own young and adorable 'mascot' !! hugs // paul
Date: 6/2/2014 1:22:00 AM
This is great!!! So great I will post a poem in response!!!!! cheers!
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/2/2014 10:21:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Arthur! Looking forward to seeing your response!! Olive is one great 'girl'!! // paul
Date: 5/25/2014 7:09:00 AM
Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Sara! Glad you enjoyed :) cu // paul
Date: 5/21/2014 6:29:00 AM
Hi Paul, This was sweet~ Glad I stopped by as always my friend. Best to you in the contest. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/21/2014 9:36:00 AM
Hi Deborah! lovely visit and comments, as usual:) Glad you enjoyed...thank you. Love and peace, paul
Date: 5/20/2014 9:02:00 AM
Big smile it left me with a smile and my heels clicking ;) ...love Jayne x
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:05:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed, Jayne; txs for witty comment. // paul
Date: 5/20/2014 1:31:00 AM
Great funny write Paul. Very well done. Best wishes. Pete.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 9:34:00 AM
Hi Peter! Thanks for stopping by; glad you enjoyed! cu // paul
Date: 5/19/2014 4:51:00 PM
A sweet Clerihew.... Wishing you luck... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Skat... a most welcome visit:) /x/ paul
Date: 5/19/2014 10:09:00 AM
ohh, i can relate, paul...i'm pinoy too.. gooood one!.. hugggs
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 10:57:00 AM
Yes, you sure can relate....but you did not stay kicking your heels:)) /x/ paul
Date: 5/19/2014 10:00:00 AM
Wow! I just thought: "A Clerihew in Maltese must be fun to, right?" This English Clerihew is awesome. alsoI like the book "Biography for Beginners" (1905), by E. C. Bentley (inventor of this Form), have you read it? I love your Poems and Comments. Sahha!!!.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 10:54:00 AM
To tell you the truth I have never written one in Maltese, but now I will! No, I haven't read that book; what I know is that Bentley's 2nd name was Clerihew:) cu (narak) my friend. // paul
Date: 5/18/2014 10:37:00 PM
Cute tribute, Paul!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 9:30:00 AM
Glad you like it, Jake :) Clerihew rules ask for a measure of wittiness. // paul
Date: 5/18/2014 10:05:00 PM
Wonderful Paul..You guys are having some good fun
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 9:19:00 AM
Doing our best, Tim :) life is crying for variety. txs for stopping by. // paul
Date: 5/18/2014 4:43:00 PM
aww a lovely poem, reminds me of a poem i wrote, its about liking some one but been too scared to say anything, and thanks for your feed back on my poem forbidden love, it was written just for poetry, and there is always hope.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:30:00 PM
Hi Diane! So lovely to have you stopping by! Yes, this poem speaks of the same experience you wrote about, but in a witty way, while your poem must have been on the sad side. (I have no doubt you were not speaking from personal experience in 'forbidden love' :)) // paul
Date: 5/18/2014 4:29:00 PM
Oh Paul Olive will love this and hopefully Andrea too! hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:13:00 PM
Well, Jan....Olive_eloi is already giggling, so that's ok. Hope Andrea will enjoy it, too. Take care :) // paul
Date: 5/18/2014 4:19:00 PM
hahahahahaha.. :D :P Paul.. :D! you got me giggling here :P
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 2:57:00 AM
PAUL we are taking it easy .. not in a hurry as you know here...... man and woman is prohibited to be together unless with a couples.. :D hope on phil.. :O?!!!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:08:00 PM
Eh! Olive_eloi...you have to move fast, otherwise...:))))) but at least you're having a good giggle:)) God bless you! // paul