Olive Eloi

There is a girl, Olive_eloi Who is in love with a Pinoy She wants to tell him what she feels But loses out kicking her heels. ----------------------------------------- Written 18th May 2014 Contest: A Clerihew - and Make it New! Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/27/2020 3:17:00 PM

Written on my birthday. Fascinating.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/29/2020 5:17:00 AM

Hmmm I'll have to make a note of that :) Have a lovely day, Eileen. HUgs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2014 3:31:00 PM

She is a dear! Lovely write for a lovely person.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2014 7:09:00 PM

Thank you for the visit Eileen; Olive_eloi is one of the sweetest girls around. Now I have to go and read a certain sonnet that a friend of mine has written about a lady friend of mine:)) Goodnight...it's past my bedtime! (2.10am) // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2014 4:42:00 PM

Dear Paul, now I'm having to go farther down your lists to find poems I haven't read. This is adorable and I bet the Soup's own "Olive" felt honored by this witty tribute. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 6/12/2014 5:19:00 PM

Hi Carolyn...thank you for the endless support I receive from you:) A Clerihew is supposed to be written with a vip in mind, but I could not resist writing one for soup's own young and adorable 'mascot' !! hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/2/2014 1:22:00 AM

This is great!!! So great I will post a poem in response!!!!! cheers!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/2/2014 10:21:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Arthur! Looking forward to seeing your response!! Olive is one great 'girl'!! // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/25/2014 7:09:00 AM

Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Sara! Glad you enjoyed :) cu // paul

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/21/2014 6:29:00 AM

Hi Paul, This was sweet~ Glad I stopped by as always my friend. Best to you in the contest. Love and Peace, Deborah

Paul Callus
Date: 5/21/2014 9:36:00 AM

Hi Deborah! lovely visit and comments, as usual:) Glad you enjoyed...thank you. Love and peace, paul

Jayne Eggins

Date: 5/20/2014 9:02:00 AM

Big smile it left me with a smile and my heels clicking ;) ...love Jayne x

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 10:05:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed, Jayne; txs for witty comment. // paul

Peter Dome

Date: 5/20/2014 1:31:00 AM

Great funny write Paul. Very well done. Best wishes. Pete.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 9:34:00 AM

Hi Peter! Thanks for stopping by; glad you enjoyed! cu // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2014 4:51:00 PM

A sweet Clerihew.... Wishing you luck... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Skat... a most welcome visit:) /x/ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2014 10:09:00 AM

ohh, i can relate, paul...i'm pinoy too.. gooood one!.. hugggs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 10:57:00 AM

Yes, you sure can relate....but you did not stay kicking your heels:)) /x/ paul

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/19/2014 10:00:00 AM

Wow! I just thought: "A Clerihew in Maltese must be fun to, right?" This English Clerihew is awesome. alsoI like the book "Biography for Beginners" (1905), by E. C. Bentley (inventor of this Form), have you read it? I love your Poems and Comments. Sahha!!!.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 10:54:00 AM

To tell you the truth I have never written one in Maltese, but now I will! No, I haven't read that book; what I know is that Bentley's 2nd name was Clerihew:) cu (narak) my friend. // paul

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/18/2014 10:37:00 PM

Cute tribute, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 9:30:00 AM

Glad you like it, Jake :) Clerihew rules ask for a measure of wittiness. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 5/18/2014 10:05:00 PM

Wonderful Paul..You guys are having some good fun

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2014 9:19:00 AM

Doing our best, Tim :) life is crying for variety. txs for stopping by. // paul

Diane Christian

Date: 5/18/2014 4:43:00 PM

aww a lovely poem, reminds me of a poem i wrote, its about liking some one but been too scared to say anything, and thanks for your feed back on my poem forbidden love, it was written just for poetry, and there is always hope.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:30:00 PM

Hi Diane! So lovely to have you stopping by! Yes, this poem speaks of the same experience you wrote about, but in a witty way, while your poem must have been on the sad side. (I have no doubt you were not speaking from personal experience in 'forbidden love' :)) // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2014 4:29:00 PM

Oh Paul Olive will love this and hopefully Andrea too! hugs as ever Jan xxx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:13:00 PM

Well, Jan....Olive_eloi is already giggling, so that's ok. Hope Andrea will enjoy it, too. Take care :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/18/2014 4:19:00 PM

hahahahahaha.. :D :P Paul.. :D! you got me giggling here :P

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 2:57:00 AM

PAUL we are taking it easy .. not in a hurry as you know here...... man and woman is prohibited to be together unless with a couples.. :D hope on phil.. :O?!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 5:08:00 PM

Eh! Olive_eloi...you have to move fast, otherwise...:))))) but at least you're having a good giggle:)) God bless you! // paul