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Old Soul Speaking To Young Soul

Silly orange Chinese dragon lights the sky up with excitement. Only the oldest souls can see him; I am one of them, so I wave. He is doing flips and tricks, showing off for no worthwhile reason. Why does he act like that? I ask my mother with disgust. Forgetting she has a young soul and does not see him at all.

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Date: 5/1/2023 9:27:00 PM
Your mother with a young soul.... ! Like this poem concise with a pinch of humor.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/2/2023 7:49:00 PM
thank you Valsa

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