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Old Footfalls

Echoes of past Sounds that had been Touches once in lust Now nothing   Ah, you are not dead in a sense Your eyes had read these very prints Much of my eyes I got from your genes Many see in it your glint   Once glimmer of gold As she would say Now of bronze a little old The iris in dismay   I go through in delight What you had once read Feels how were your day and night What you loved green or red   Your handwritten notes in margin Those acute angled alphabets Is the evidence of my beginning Burnt holes on some pages, of my cigarettes   And that too your brand The brown rings of capstan Under the feet loose sand Your warmth in my hand I too love to underline As I read my favourite books Copious notes of mine Almost identical looks   I do feel the soft leaf Of your palm on my cheek A cloud of brief grief In the dark, something do I seek?   The dictionary you used I love to consult very often The smokes you abused A feature common   The way I read and write I feel I arose from you You loved to fill the pages white On which now falls my dew   I wish I could retain The values you entertained But your fountain pen has to remain Empty, no ink, the market complains   If I refuse to drink whisky In a party, sometimes, Many a friend laughs at me They would say, take juice of lime   Photographic films are not sold The shop keepers look on and smile As if a customer two generation old The contax camera lies idle We move on with our times Stream eats into old banks We change our rhymes and crimes To the changing river, thanks   We caress it, hold to our chest Smell and look through too Bring out your poses in rest Again inside eyes the dew This way we continue The before toward the after Your things are my moments with you Nothing in a sense is closed chapter __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4/11/2016 For the Poetry Contest:. Old Jewelry or Just Old Things or Old, Old Poems -  Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 11/8/2016 8:33:00 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your wining write: -) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/8/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/7/2016 10:50:00 PM
Thank you and congratulations on your excellent win for 'Spring Bloom Tulips of Perfect Love' ... Great work ...
Date: 11/7/2016 7:59:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 11/7/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for liking my poem ....
Date: 11/7/2016 4:56:00 AM
Such a deep nostalgic masterpiece, Probir! You deserve A 7! Congrats on your creative write!
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Date: 11/7/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen ...
Date: 11/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
returning to send my best congrats on your marvelous win, probir.. huggs
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Date: 11/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thank you ... and congrats on your really marvellous win ...
Date: 11/6/2016 6:56:00 AM
A 7 for this very reflective, moving piece, Probir! Janice
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Date: 11/6/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation ....
Date: 11/4/2016 2:32:00 PM
unraveling the bright seams of tokens drom the heart.. ever lovely, probir!..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/4/2016 9:26:00 AM
A masterpiece of glittering memories kept safe in the mind and heart dear, Probir! A seven. Good luck my friend!
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Date: 11/4/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you for the touching comments, Demetrios ...
Date: 11/4/2016 7:58:00 AM
Such wonderful memories, Probir. Good luck my friend:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/4/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you , Daniel ...
Date: 11/4/2016 6:27:00 AM
Such introspective musings... very well expressed feelings of the past. Nice!
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Date: 11/4/2016 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Rebecca ...
Date: 11/4/2016 2:54:00 AM
Great write, Probir. And good luck
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/4/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/4/2016 12:17:00 AM
Life is poetry, Poetry is life, and you have expressed this so well! Great poem!
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Date: 11/4/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arthur ... my reply to Victor has got posted in your space ... weird ...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/4/2016 12:22:00 AM
It is a delight for me that you like it ... thank you ... do you stay online always ? ... I will log out now and return at about 3/30 to read new poems ...

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