Oh, Turn It Off



When Dad passed I moved home with Mom,
       We were roommates at first;
Shopping, lunching, gardening, it was fun,
There were some signs that began, slowly.
     A small forgetfulness,
One day, Mom said I cannot write my name;
     So, I did the banking,
Soon I was doing all the groceries.

The housework, the cooking, I did it all,
       Mom needed full time care;
She was sick and stayed mostly in her bed,
I became the Mom, the daughter gone.
     My own life put on hold,
I was her everything and this adult said;
     When all hope was gone,
Oh turn off the life support please, please.


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April 21, 2015


Poetry/Verse/ Oh, Turn It Off
Copyright Protected, ID 04-665-861-21
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest Screwed III
sponsor, Rob Carmack, Judged

Seventh Place
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Written for the contest, The True Meaning Of Being An Adult,
sponsor, FJ Thomas, HM, 05/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/15/2015 9:53:00 PM
Returning to say congrats!
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:55:00 PM
Broken, sweet win...Linda
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:30:00 PM
BROKEN, congrats on your Screwed III win. SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2015 4:01:00 PM
BW, so happy to see this beautiful, emotional poem about you and your dear mom on the winner's list. My heartfelt congratulations to you. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2015 9:30:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2015 7:55:00 AM
You are a wonderful daughter, your mother must have felt blessed with you around. Congrats on your win here! I am honored to have read your poetry and in effect get know you over time...
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Date: 5/6/2015 12:01:00 PM
What a great poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/30/2015 7:51:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:48:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:41:00 PM
I can see your heart through out this Poem. It is a Poem that brings my heart to tears. I am sorry about your Mom, I fully believe that she will never be fully gone, She will always be with you, She will laugh when you laugh, cry when you cry, Same for your Dad. They will always be with you. So remember to smile for no reason every so often, because as you smile they will also smile.
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:57:00 PM
WOW, Broken... it is hard to be an adult, but one grows up rather fast when life moves this way...Congrats my friend.. LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:56:00 PM
Poignant, and so often this is the turning point. My own was similar, Constance... a childhood gone, when a parent is in need. Well done !
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:42:00 PM
A great poem on a subject many of us are becoming far too familiar with...just went through this with my mother a couple years ago. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/28/2015 1:55:00 PM
A sad poem giving us one the sorrows of adulthood. Congrats on finalizing with this great write.
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Date: 4/28/2015 12:17:00 PM
A heartbreaking story, which some of us has gone through, including this reader, BW. Congratulations on your fine win for this beautiful verse of life and sadness and maturing. Honored to be with you in FJ's list. It was a tough decision, but eventually we have to make one. HUgs!!! :) :) Kim
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:27:00 AM
Constance, I can relate to this. The struggles test the strengths of the bravehearts and the courageous. you will surely derive the satisfaction of your good deeds and will have no regrets ever and feel happy. A lovely write and best for the contest. Mohan
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:47:00 AM
heartfelt and heartbreaking, dear Constance - a sure winner here
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Date: 4/23/2015 7:27:00 PM
So touching and sad and so well done, Constance!
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Date: 4/23/2015 1:24:00 PM
Or you could just come over to my house and stab my heart with a knife. A powerful meaningful write. I am presently still caring for my mom but I know one day...well somethings remain better unsaid. I can't help but fav this write firstly and mostly for the quality of the work.
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Date: 4/23/2015 1:28:00 AM
nice, honest work right from the heart... i loved it!! :)
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:05:00 PM
You have wrenched the poet's heart from it's closet dear poet ! Wow ! This was an earth moving write Constance ! I've been in this situation and it is a dramatic call. TY for easing my painful memories...............much love, james
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:58:00 AM
The road is never easy. I took care of a mother like that, but I found joy in it too. Thanks, Broken. Nicely said...
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:01:00 PM
Yes, very powerful and emotional write. Heartbreaking.
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Date: 4/21/2015 9:10:00 PM
Sad but beautifully penned. Compels me to reach out and comfort. Thank you for sharing this. #7
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Date: 4/21/2015 8:05:00 PM
wowowowow, If only I had the life experience to write something so worthy of the topic of this contest. I have not even seen any other entries. but your is just amazing.
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