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Oh, Those Days of Innocence

Oh, those days of innocence when I was a child, those lazy days with my two sweet brothers; we had not a care and spent our days dreaming, I loved to tell stories on the bed in the sun. We snuggled close together, I had the skill even then; to make up stories, for my two favorite boys; I wish to turn back the pages to those days. Oh, those days of simplicity when I was a child, so much has happened in our life's since then; I want to take them in my arms and protect them, from all the struggles that they now face. each day and today, and call me a coward; but my mind wants yesterday, when we snuggled together; and knew nothing but the joy of the sun and stories. ___________________________ November 10, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Oh, Those Days of Innocence Copyright Protected, ID 17-9600-75-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Photostory sponsor, Eve Roper Theme #1 Chosen First Place

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Date: 12/3/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is how I feel about childhood too. That was my second pick if I were going to write for this challenge again!! Congrats on the fantastic win, dear.
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Date: 12/3/2017 2:26:00 AM
Lovely piece, Constance, congratulations! Viv x
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Date: 12/2/2017 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2017 4:56:00 PM
A delightful entry Constance! Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! : )
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Date: 12/2/2017 3:37:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest ,Broken Wings, your imagery and flow of words is wonderful. I love your last stanza , if I could bring a safe haven for all of them. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:41:00 AM
Wow, Constance, beautifully put, I have chosen the same pic too:) (mine is yet to be posted)
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Date: 11/11/2017 4:33:00 AM
This is a wonderful write my friend! I surely loved how you wove the innocence of the three children within your delightful poem here this morning! What a fabulous piece, intriguing in all aspects, filling me with an incredible awe that I desire to re-read the poem again and again! which I have done several times now! Thank you for posting this gem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 2:48:00 PM
This should be a winner. Good luck to you.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2017 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, appreciate your comment

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