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I live in Canada- land of winter, our summers are much anticipated; I learned early to be a rain sprinter, sometimes our warm weather is belated. We wait and wait until we want to scream, our spring days are confused- one warm, one cold; while walking in snow I "summer" dream, some days are lovely with a sun of gold. In a warm spell- I put away my coat, a few days later my boots- my hat; but the next DAY in snow I was afloat, and without boots on the ice I fell flat. This is how my winter turned to summer, when at last it came- it was MIDSUMMER! __________________ August 20, 2017 Sonnet/Oh Summer, Summer Copyright Protected, ID 932248 Written for the contest, How Your Winter Turned Into Summer sponsor, Brenda Chiri Second Place

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Date: 9/1/2017 8:47:00 AM
thats nice poem...
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:30:00 AM
Congratulation BW on your win with a beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/30/2017 9:44:00 PM
Crazy weather in Canada...well everywhere this year! Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 8/21/2017 8:31:00 AM
Canada Eh!...land of the igloo lol...a warm write Constance lol...hope all is good my friend...and pesky winter is coming soon...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:23:00 AM
Ha ha, perfect for the contest, Constance, here in my place, we long for cooler days;)
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:29:00 AM
Fantastic Constance! I truly loved this incredible write, I thought this to be a perfect poem for the contest! I love the winters, maybe not Canadian winters, but winters where I'm from, and the summers are too HOT for me! Maybe I need to move into Canada! Great work my friend!!
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:46:00 PM
HI. I can understand this, being near the border of Canada and experiencing what you wrote about so clearly! Good luck in the contest :) OH, and great photo to go with the poem!
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:35:00 PM
Enjoyed your write, Constance! GL in contest! It is a great one!
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:06:00 PM
Stilettos in the snow? I love this poem BW. I lived in a cold climate once. I can relate somewhat. Regards, Dean
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:57:00 PM
I live where summer is too hot and too long. Wish I could send a few days to you! I love your writing.
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