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Oh Sea

Oh sea, we sail your sultry wave. The salty taste on panting tongues. The wild splash does not behave - The ebb and flow of twining lungs. Oh sea, we sail with mermaid tales. Our men do crave the seaweed wraps, Toss overboard by giant whales, Or climb below and take long naps. Oh sea, we see the horizon, The loss of land, triangle’s peak. We lie upon the deck, rise in The cockcrow suite - we cannot speak. Oh sea, the foaming clouds, under, over - they breach my naked feet. The lightning, dark, with stark thunder. Nightmare! The wonderment, complete. Oh sea, this day but shining bright. The boat’s luxury slant, we grin. The sirens, lost…our gang is tight. Whether we race or swim, we win. 7/23/2022 Sailing Poetry Julia Ward

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Date: 7/27/2022 6:38:00 PM
oh, nice Kim. Great entry! Linda
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Date: 7/27/2022 7:26:00 AM
So vivid picture portrayed by a Navy Persona. EXCELLENT SURE to win TOP LOVE.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2022 2:09:00 PM
Thanks so much! Love to you too, my friend!
Date: 7/26/2022 6:46:00 PM
You seem to be quite familiar with the sea, Kim. But do I recall correctly? Were you in the Navy?! ~ Landlubber
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2022 8:47:00 PM
I served in Navy for 8 years but also have been on several cruises :)
Date: 7/25/2022 6:02:00 PM
Love the ebb and flow here, Kim, its a wonderful poem. Good luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2022 5:15:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/25/2022 10:42:00 AM
I like ve the sea and the poem and how you laid it out! Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2022 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! <3 Kim
Date: 7/24/2022 7:46:00 PM
Good job.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2022 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, Miranda!
Date: 7/24/2022 3:38:00 PM
Wonderful images along the way, Kim--enjoyed the journey through your hues. A joyous, buoyant voice to your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2022 4:22:00 AM
We are drawn to the sea :) Thanks, Vijay! ~ Kim
Date: 7/24/2022 11:03:00 AM
My friend, this is truly a fine new creation. The sea has been the subject of many of my poems, especially so the over 600 poems from the early 70's that were stolen from me and burned in a bad breakup back then! A true gem and a very wonderful new fav...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you! It must have been awful for someone to destroy your work.
Date: 7/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
The sea with all its ferociousness and those aboard experiencing its changing moods ! Great poem, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 2:59:00 PM
Thank you! You understand… Kim
Date: 7/24/2022 1:24:00 AM
When you write on the sea you send me to heaven. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 5:39:00 AM
Oh for the love of the sea! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/23/2022 6:43:00 PM
Well matey, I find this very seaworthy indeed!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 5:41:00 AM
Welcome aboard! Thank you! :)
Date: 7/23/2022 2:01:00 PM
Great poem Kim. Well written. I miss going to the coast of Maine this summer. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2022 5:38:00 PM
So beautiful there! We were set to go back on a cruise then the pandemic hit.

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