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Oh, My Valentine

Hey, smiling beauty My ravishing companion Arriving in spring to give my life a lift I shall sing for you, our love’s tuneful lore Cynosure of beauty, you are The darling of everyone’s eye I wonder how I could get through Without you by my side You are there to remind me How beautiful this life is! Indoor or outdoor, I look for your company In my solitary room, you sit and smile. As I go for a walk, you are around me. You dress in pink, red, mauve or pastel shades The sweet scent you carry takes my breath away. Your pervading aroma Stirs and thrills my nerves You hold so much poetry n’ romance, On your soft crimson cheeks I see magic hiding in your eyes In your sweet company, my aches I forget You restore into me Life’s tuneful harmony Will you stay with me As an abiding companion But sadly I recognize, You are a fair weather friend! My Valentine, let me kiss you in public Steal the honey out of you Nobody would object my act Except perhaps a BUTTERFLY! Feb.21. 2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May

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Date: 3/8/2023 10:56:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win. This is utterly delightful! So many wonderful and innovative images! Love the twist of the last line. Indeed spring is a faithful companion dressed in beautiful pastels! This poem is filled with the warmth of a compassionate friend. Love the line "I see magic hiding in your eyes." Spring is indeed magic and you weave her spell with such fun and beauty! Blessings of spring to you sweet friend!
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Date: 3/7/2023 11:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely done
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I Love your ending. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:36:00 AM
Haha I was enchanted all the way to the reveal of who it was - congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:27:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning placement, Valsa.
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:23:00 PM
this is charming and so adorable!
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Date: 2/22/2023 8:01:00 AM
Gracious poem on St Valentine's Day. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:09:00 PM
I very beautiful love poem, I loved the last line!
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:51:00 PM
Such a sweet poem Valsa! I truly enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 2/21/2023 7:02:00 AM
Wonderfully emotive ode to spring, Valsa. Enjoyed the sweet vibes you convey. Best to you.
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:22:00 AM
Valsa, you've written excellent poetry. Many emotions and feelings were conveyed here that will not vanish. Your words are quite motivating in terms of attachment and expertise, and your imagery is excellent. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2023 2:18:00 AM
This is brilliant, mine pales in comparison, Valsa:)
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