Oh, Dream Sweet Dreams

The touch of cold enters my life,
the hands of time move faster
than the speed of light;
the spinning of the world
takes on a new meaning
as I lie awake in the
pitch blackness of the night.
What was, will never be again,
what is to come, still a mystery;
the night pours out of me
in thick droplets of sweat,
covering my shivering body
in a glistening hue of black.
All around is the silence,
except for the pounding of
my bursting heart;
what was real is now gone,
vanished into the darkness...
into the deep, dark crevices of my mind.
The images now distorted
whirl by for the remainder of
the pitch blackness of the night;
surreal is the only word to describe
this trembling, awful night of terror.
"Dream sweet dreams" we tell our children,
but the night can bring horror instead of joy;
"Dream sweet dreams" we tell ourselves,
but we know better than the lie we verse...
much better than the night we curse.


For "Dream Land" contest sponsored by Olajide Adelana.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win George. Love, Carol
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February 14, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations on your grand win in the Contest, George! Always a joy to read! Always, Annalise
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February 12, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Hi George - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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February 12, 2011 at 8:34 AM
This poem has so much truth....the night can often manifest the darkest thoughts, the blackest worries, that only daylight can shoo away. Well done! Congratulations, George!
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February 11, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Congrats George on your super success in Debbie's contest with this amazing entry .. enjoy a top spot for a top notch poem luv..
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February 9, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Good wording and rhyming in this presentation, George. My entry "My Friend's Woman" is fictional. You did render great advice which I agree with totally.
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February 8, 2011 at 11:36 AM
George, some people do have "sweet dreams" most of the time, but like you I dread falling asleep. Have had nightmares since childhood and actually take medication to try and prevent them. The way you describe sweating and shivering in the darkness as your heart pounds is exactly the way it feels. Maybe if we could find more joy in life it wouldn't be this way, but I know I was a happy kid so the remedy eludes me. Brilliant poem for my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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