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Ghazal
A poetic form consisting of couplets that share a rhyme and a refrain. The couplets have lines of 10 syllables (Including the refrain). The refrain can be a word or a phrase. There is internal rhyming in lines 1 and 2, and line 2 of each couplet with the refrain. Each couplet should be able to stand alone. There is no limit to the number of couplets in a Ghazal.

Oh, Death, why do people fear You so much, can you say why the living dread Your touch? Death, You are how mortal existence ends, yet few can say they do not dread Your touch. Death, only through You, can our souls ascend, and still, those waiting in queue dread Your touch. Death, You are the angel that ends all pain; and we are not sure why we dread Your touch. Death, for life, You are indispensable, and yet, it's also true; we dread Your touch.

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Date: 5/6/2019 2:21:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2019 4:30:00 PM
Oh, sweet Emile, I know you don’t believe, but I say then why do we yearn so much for eternity...it screams within our very soul. My dad once asked why the types of spiritual things that me and my sisters experience don’t happen to him. I had to ponder. You must have faith the size (so small) of a mustard seed then the Holy Spirit will open your eyes. Ask Jesus to let you see. <3 Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/18/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Kim, Your faith is your strength, may you always be strong my friend, Emile.

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