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Oh, Those Eyes

he had the most piercing blue eyes so handsome in a rugged way he shyly introduced himself the start of that wonderful day He spoke of visiting our town his voice piercing my lonely heart A cup of coffee and small talk I loved him from the very start That was so many years ago for the loss of him my heart cries life led us down different paths but oh love, those piercing blue eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2015 12:11:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations, A nice "Pierced" win. Love LINDA **
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:14:00 AM
Ahh Barbara....sweet memories that come back from time to time; and those blue eyes will always smile back at you! Congratulations on a lovely win. // paul
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:25:00 PM
Lovely little lost love poem. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara, a truly splendid piece.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/7/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you dear...appreciate it! Barbara
Date: 3/7/2015 7:03:00 AM
It is my favorite poem Barbara...Congrats on win
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/7/2015 7:48:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say..thank you so much. BG
Date: 3/6/2015 7:27:00 PM
Nice poem, Barbara...full of wonder of what could have been...but those piercing blue eyes will always be with you. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2015 5:42:00 PM
Reminds me of Paul Newman or Tony Curtis! Congrats.
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:56:00 PM
Dropping back again to congratulate you on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful portrayal of young love - Makes me wonder what could have happened ... but that is something we can ponder and will never know - lovely write about ole blue eyes - a 7 from me
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Date: 3/2/2015 12:55:00 PM
Loved this Barbara "piercing blue eyes"..sweet poem very sweet "That was so many years ago for the loss of him my heart cries life led us down different paths but oh love, those piercing blue eyes"---so great. God bless.
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