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''Oh, My Withered Dreams''

. . . I am lost in a sea of memories that scar the road map of my bleeding soul; my words- the highway to my deep pain, and I follow a labyrinth of passages and corridors curved and contrived- Oh, what of my withered dreams, my hopes! Why do I seek out past sorrows that come drifting like a dark death melody . . . My grief comes unbidden to stain my years, and my tears hang from dripping branches in a . . . graveyard where tombs stand in rows and rows of green grass . . . and happy hummingbirds hover in heavenly harmony and red roses decay and the wind is a violin (barefoot, ragged, hair tangled- I am a girl, in my dreams) and blood seeps from the daggers in my heart . . . . . . life stretches before me like a long road. Oh, I am sick of all this sorrow- decay I want days as clear as sparkling wine, to live a life of peace and serenity; with days brilliant blue and nights full of stars, and picture perfect, instead of this vast empty place- Oh, bitter this life- yet . . . a fire burns within me and soon I will be set free . . . ________________________ May 16, 2017 (Written, February 13, 2017) Free Verse/Oh, My Withered Dreams Copyright Protected, ID 901079 Brian Strand 25 Lines First Place

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Date: 5/19/2017 3:25:00 PM
Constance, so sad, but written with words that so beautifully image your sadness and pain. Congratulations on your podium win in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/18/2017 4:19:00 PM
Indeed my friend, whomever is bound in this poem has already been set free. Those elusive dreams have been arrested, captured, and adjusted. The 'soon' is therefore the 'now'. Congrats. Great poem.
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Date: 5/17/2017 1:02:00 PM
You rescued us from such sorrow with the hope of your last line. Well done BW.
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Date: 5/17/2017 1:33:00 AM
Excellent. As usual a beautiful and touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/16/2017 6:29:00 PM
Beautiful writing, as usual from you. Sorrow is like mud in your soul that has to bubble up and up as a clear spring washes it away - and it does.
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