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Of You, This My Journey

Of you, this my journey ~ Wide eyed illusions of spring flower wishes With maple trees dotting the land that I seek Open and lonely I stroll through the valleys Where grasshoppers sing and the whisperers speak Spaces between us with fields overgrowing And highways of asphalt as long as the sky Dreaming of visions I’ve found in your smile While longing your touch as I wish I could fly Everyday detours with corners and pot holes They seem to be daunting but I will succeed Of you, this my journey, my lone destination Now leading to you and all that I need Good night Soupers

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Date: 4/20/2017 8:40:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. As a dreamer, I'll keep those beautiful illusions. Please allow me to say your entries need no attached image for the words are the imagery. Say hello to those detours and pot holes, I know them well (ha ha). Your work is beautiful. Well done in its entirety.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 9:51:00 AM
Thanks so much again my friend. I will say hi to them as I graciously do my best to avoid them. :) I appreciate your kind thoughts Lisa.
Date: 4/19/2017 4:56:00 AM
Sleep Chris, sleep the sadness away. Dream of love and of being together :) Sweet dreams my friend. And whatever the subject, your poems are always beautiful, and whatever the mood, it sweeps me off my feet and what you always tell me is true for you too. Your emotions are palpable in your poems, that's part of why they are so good.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:55:00 AM
No sadness here my friend, just a poem that came to me as I was writing. The ending seemed appropriate to where the pome was going. Thanks Darren for everything.
Date: 4/19/2017 3:27:00 AM
Captivating, a beautiful masterpiece Chris, one for my favorites and a seven.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Elizabeth. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much. Your comments make me smile.
Date: 4/19/2017 2:01:00 AM
Yes yes yes! Love it to death! You are such a natural, Chris! Poetry simply flows in your veins mate! Filling the hearts of others!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thanks my friend for your encouraging comments. I appreciate your kindness always.
Date: 4/18/2017 7:06:00 PM
i love the rhyme and flow of this one, chris! masterfully done...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so very much Ilene for your kind words today.
Date: 4/18/2017 6:45:00 PM
This one is a bit different for you. I love it. Sweet dreams.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank so very much Sunlite. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 4/18/2017 6:35:00 PM
The long and winding road will lead you to her door....Follow the heartbeats...Such a beauty..Again I can feel a tinge of sadness tonight...yet this brave knight is a warrior with a will to conquer what belongs to him.Outstanding poem..Good night Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend. Now I have "The long and winding road" playing in my head and it is a great song. I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem Charmaine. It manes a lot to me
Date: 4/18/2017 6:08:00 PM
Ah....your poetry always inspires me Chris. This is blissful! 7 ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for your kindness

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