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OF ONE SWEET KISS ~~anacreontic verse~~ As yawning sun shall end the day and stars at night flutter betray, my heart besets the velvet sight and wafting breeze- no solace brings. I wander slow walking on air, pictures within whisper confuse yet, love I dare feather breath warmth, lit the magic 'til angels rose to pluck dire strings so bards may sing my lovers name. By candy flame of deep despair, seeking spirit moans in silence. Thirsty thoughts in depth of eve spell longing weep, my lone heart tears of waiting song, of one sweet kiss. . . ________________________________________ 10:01 am, October 28, 2015 ***dedicated to my HUGE ONE~~~ James Fraser

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/25/2021 6:03:00 PM

Beautiful, Olive ~ it's lovely to find this published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 11/21/2015 3:36:00 PM

Beautiful! Congrats on your first place win!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/21/2015 4:18:00 AM

Greetings Olivia! Congrats on your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/20/2015 8:22:00 PM

A beautiful write, Olive! Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! Love, KIm

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2015 2:53:00 PM

Ahh!! Love the picture..Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/19/2015 8:02:00 PM

Congratulation Olive to be at top twice a day. Really you are a great poet. Anisha D

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2015 3:02:00 PM

A wonderful dedication to your lovely James - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/19/2015 10:15:00 AM

Oh, this is so beautiful! Congratulations, Olive on your top of the tree win! Just so lovely with wonderful, capitvating imagery! Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/19/2015 8:56:00 AM

Olive, congratulations on your top of the podium win! Such a beautiful song of love! Hugs, Sandra

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/19/2015 6:59:00 AM

Hi Olive: A beautiful ode on One Sweet Kiss Congratulations!

James Inman

Date: 11/19/2015 6:34:00 AM

Again, beautiful Olive.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/19/2015 6:29:00 AM

Congrats in your super win Olive!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/19/2015 4:37:00 AM

Ah Olive what a romantic write.. hez so fortunate.. Congrats on top podium!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2015 2:10:00 AM

ohh what a kiss, eloi.. super congrats!..huggs

Michael Tor

Date: 11/18/2015 11:21:00 PM

Exceptional win Olive!!! Congratulations!!I'm sure James would love this.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thanks much Michael.. =`) I appreciate you liking this.. =`)

Lin Lane

Date: 11/18/2015 9:07:00 PM

way to go, Olive. Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2015 6:13:00 AM

thanks Lin.. :)

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 8:06:00 PM

Hi, Olive, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/23/2015 9:47:00 PM

Thanks much Skat.. =`)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/18/2015 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations in the placement of the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2015 8:45:00 PM

thanks much NAyda.. =`)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/18/2015 6:13:00 PM

I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thank you Edward for seeing my poem worthy to be at the top.. =`)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2015 6:57:00 PM

;) ahhh he is a big man aye? LOL good writing dear Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 AM

Yes Debbie he is.. =`) thanks much!!=`) hugs@

Mark Woods

Date: 11/3/2015 11:42:00 AM

This poem is divine, a beautiful write and so romantic.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/19/2015 2:37:00 AM

MArk, I thank you for your encouraging comment.. =`) Its a mega booster.. =`)

James Inman

Date: 11/3/2015 8:46:00 AM

Aaahhhh, you make me sigh Olive. I agree with the comment you left on my poem, they seem to be mostly romantic. I think the form works well for that, almost like whispering sweet nothings into someones ear. Beautiful write.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 6:37:00 AM

thanks much James.. =`) your comment is encouraging.. =`)

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2015 10:02:00 AM

So romantic is your heart !! Love this Olive !! And a great big thank you for my placement in your "yummy" cake and ice cream challenge" !!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 6:35:00 AM

thank you so much Carrie, I just tried this form and i thought its nice.. =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2015 6:10:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi, you make use of this Anacreontic form with a capable pen. Longing for a sweet kiss...thirsty the lips that can for now only be quenched virtually! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/19/2015 2:36:00 AM

weee, this my first try and you know I always like new forms.. =`)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/5/2015 1:52:00 AM

Paul, thanks much for your comment.. =`)~Olive ELoisa hugs!

Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/29/2015 3:38:00 PM

This is an absolutely beautiful and sad lyric! The imagery is just perfect little snapshots. Emotionally, you strummed my heartstrings and caused me to think, so very long ago, when my husband died too young. This could be a Free Verse as well as a lyric in that the rhyme is not strict and one can rhym occasionally throughout a Free Verse. I think you could file it under either genre. Just love this Seven(7)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/5/2015 12:56:00 AM

I love your reply Edlynn so appreciate it.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)