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Of One Sweet Kiss- Anacreontic Verse

OF ONE SWEET KISS
 ~~anacreontic verse~~

     As  yawning  sun
   shall end the day
     and stars at night
   flutter betray,
     my heart besets
   the velvet sight
     and wafting breeze-
   no solace brings.
     I wander slow
   walking on air,
     pictures within
   whisper confuse
     yet, love I dare
   feather breath warmth,
     lit the magic
   'til angels rose
     to pluck dire strings
   so bards may sing
     my lovers name.
   By candy flame
     of deep despair,
   seeking spirit
     moans in silence.
   Thirsty thoughts
     in depth of eve
   spell longing weep,
     my lone heart tears
   of waiting song,
     of one sweet kiss. . .
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10:01 am, October 28, 2015


***dedicated to my HUGE ONE~~~ James Fraser

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Line Gauthier Date: 1/25/2021 6:03:00 PM Beautiful, Olive ~ it's lovely to find this published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ Login to Reply

Jeannie Cronin Date: 11/21/2015 3:36:00 PM Beautiful! Congrats on your first place win! Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 11/21/2015 4:18:00 AM Greetings Olivia! Congrats on your #1 placement in the contest! ;-) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 11/20/2015 8:22:00 PM A beautiful write, Olive! Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! Love, KIm Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/20/2015 2:53:00 PM Ahh!! Love the picture..Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 11/19/2015 8:02:00 PM Congratulation Olive to be at top twice a day. Really you are a great poet. Anisha D Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 3:02:00 PM A wonderful dedication to your lovely James - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/19/2015 10:15:00 AM Oh, this is so beautiful! Congratulations, Olive on your top of the tree win! Just so lovely with wonderful, capitvating imagery! Pandita Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/19/2015 8:56:00 AM Olive, congratulations on your top of the podium win! Such a beautiful song of love! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 11/19/2015 6:59:00 AM Hi Olive: A beautiful ode on One Sweet Kiss Congratulations! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 11/19/2015 6:34:00 AM Again, beautiful Olive. Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 11/19/2015 6:29:00 AM Congrats in your super win Olive! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/19/2015 4:37:00 AM Ah Olive what a romantic write.. hez so fortunate.. Congrats on top podium! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/19/2015 2:10:00 AM ohh what a kiss, eloi.. super congrats!..huggs Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 11/18/2015 11:21:00 PM Exceptional win Olive!!! Congratulations!!I'm sure James would love this. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2016 6:44:00 AM Thanks much Michael.. =`) I appreciate you liking this.. =`)

Lin Lane Date: 11/18/2015 9:07:00 PM way to go, Olive. Congratulations. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/24/2015 6:13:00 AM thanks Lin.. :)

Skat A Date: 11/18/2015 8:06:00 PM Hi, Olive, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT** Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/23/2015 9:47:00 PM Thanks much Skat.. =`)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 11/18/2015 7:22:00 PM Congratulations in the placement of the contest. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 8:45:00 PM thanks much NAyda.. =`)

Edward Ebbs Date: 11/18/2015 6:13:00 PM I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 8:42:00 PM Thank you Edward for seeing my poem worthy to be at the top.. =`)

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/3/2015 6:57:00 PM ;) ahhh he is a big man aye? LOL good writing dear Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 AM Yes Debbie he is.. =`) thanks much!!=`) hugs@

Mark Woods Date: 11/3/2015 11:42:00 AM This poem is divine, a beautiful write and so romantic. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/19/2015 2:37:00 AM MArk, I thank you for your encouraging comment.. =`) Its a mega booster.. =`)

James Inman Date: 11/3/2015 8:46:00 AM Aaahhhh, you make me sigh Olive. I agree with the comment you left on my poem, they seem to be mostly romantic. I think the form works well for that, almost like whispering sweet nothings into someones ear. Beautiful write. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 6:37:00 AM thanks much James.. =`) your comment is encouraging.. =`)

Carrie Richards Date: 11/2/2015 10:02:00 AM So romantic is your heart !! Love this Olive !! And a great big thank you for my placement in your "yummy" cake and ice cream challenge" !!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 6:35:00 AM thank you so much Carrie, I just tried this form and i thought its nice.. =`)

Paul Callus Date: 10/30/2015 6:10:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi, you make use of this Anacreontic form with a capable pen. Longing for a sweet kiss...thirsty the lips that can for now only be quenched virtually! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/19/2015 2:36:00 AM weee, this my first try and you know I always like new forms.. =`) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/5/2015 1:52:00 AM Paul, thanks much for your comment.. =`)~Olive ELoisa hugs!

Edlynn Nau Date: 10/29/2015 3:38:00 PM This is an absolutely beautiful and sad lyric! The imagery is just perfect little snapshots. Emotionally, you strummed my heartstrings and caused me to think, so very long ago, when my husband died too young. This could be a Free Verse as well as a lyric in that the rhyme is not strict and one can rhym occasionally throughout a Free Verse. I think you could file it under either genre. Just love this Seven(7) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/5/2015 12:56:00 AM I love your reply Edlynn so appreciate it.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

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