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Of Mind -- Ck

deep thoughts heart's yearnings poet's mind's eye disclosed, distilled, displayed laid bare April 26, 2020 Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 4:23:00 PM

great description Gw, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, and congrats to you as well, C.G. (Creative Genius)! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2020 2:02:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 2:48:00 PM

Thank you! And congrats to you on your playful, imaginative #1 spot placement! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/14/2020 10:45:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on your win with this tender, eloquent write-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 2:42:00 PM

Appreciate your appreciation, Michelle! And congrats to you on your #1 placement with such a pretty poem (Of Artistry)!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:53:00 AM

laid bare.. Congrats on your great win Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 2:34:00 PM

Hope I didn't feed / fed (Choose one) your fantasies there. LOL. Thanks for noticing my placement, Jenish. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/27/2020 8:53:00 PM

Your poet's eye is eloquent and kind, gw!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2020 9:47:00 PM

Aw, sweet of you to say this, Michelle. Thank you so much. ~ Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/26/2020 9:42:00 PM

Laid bare is what makes this poem terrific.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2020 10:33:00 PM

'Naked city' was one too many syllables. lol. ~ gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/26/2020 8:19:00 PM

Yes as poets we do. The best poets reveal their secrets and risk their soft underbelly in the process. Thanks for your visit Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2020 10:31:00 PM

Ha, ha! My underbelly is getting softer by the month these days! Thanks, Richard! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/26/2020 7:50:00 PM

oh yeah...for sure... often a poet's mind spills it all... great entry for the contest... hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2020 10:30:00 PM

Spills and thrills!... Thanks, Sandra! :) gw

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/26/2020 7:43:00 PM

Beautifully done, Gershon. Each line artfully builds to a great finish - "laid bare" - love it! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dear friend.. I hope all is well with you and yours ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 4/26/2020 10:52:00 PM

Lol!! ;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2020 10:29:00 PM

Susan, be very, very very careful what you wish for! I note that you commented 'laid bare - love it!' Frankly, I just don't know how to respond! ~ Prudish Pete