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Man Who Would Be God

Once upon a time in a previous universe, 
machines began repairing themselves, 
much faster than their makers ever could, 
so the creators just left them to it 

Of course every now and then the machines 
made minute mistakes, Most of which were 
quickly spotted, and rejected

But on rare occasions, some anomalies 
made it past the screening process, 
and actually turned out to be most beneficial, 
eventually becoming dominant amongst 
fellow machines, 
a serendipitous side effect, said the creators

So this hit and miss, trial and error process 
was allowed to proceed 
and worked brilliantly up until the point where 
the machines reached a pinnacle of perfection, 
meaning they simply could not 
improve upon themselves in machine form

So it was decided by their makers to fuse together with them, 
in a last ditch effort to break the technological impasse,
For by now they had become completely fixated
on gaining omnipotence, 

And so it came to pass over epochs 
of time after endless experimentation, 
they finally achieved immortality, 
and godlike status 

But as more time passed, this also turned into a living nightmare,
when upon realising, they had now achieved everything 
that would ever be possible,
and were permanently stuck at the apex of eternity 

This made them inconceivably 
desperate and horrified, knowing they had 
condemned themselves to immortality and omnipotence, 
which by now had become so routine 
it turned into a living, boring, endless nightmare 

They computed the only logical conclusion 
to end this living hell 
was to erase everything they had ever achieved 
by destroying the universe

And so it happened to great effect, they 
imploded their whole universe into a singularity, 
killing themselves in the process 

But what happened next was totally random 
and unforeseen 
the singularity rebounded, and exponentially 
exploded forming a brand new cosmos,
coalescing into primordial particles forming 
galaxies, stars, planets, and eventually early 
life forms, on one blue sphere called earth 

As eons went by on this unique world,
a new highly creative species of creatures 
serendipitously evolved, and over time through 
trial and error, hit and miss experiments 
learned how to build machines and computers, 
and are now thinking about merging with AI

You see where this is going, don’t you!
omnipotence is the one inevitability 
of our universe 

But of course we all know 
this hypothesis cannot be right?

# which is worse hoping you will never die ~ or to live knowing you can’t # 

By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/27/2023 6:35:00 PM
Their Bible is born. As the war machine keeps turning. Im remind of Warpigs, and then there's a melocolly feel, that they like any spices are slaves to their creators. Merging with AI, inevitable! A winner indeed!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2023 8:53:00 AM
Makes sense to me Anaya, probably as much or more than the accepted view, at least here I try delve into the reason for creation, with a behind the scenes perspective of how and why a universe might come about, perhaps we ourselves are the integral link that brings it all together, cheers David
Date: 9/4/2022 10:17:00 AM
I really like this a lot David. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 9/4/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Linda, your very thoughtful to visit today I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David
Date: 9/4/2022 10:06:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win with this brilliant write, David:-). Have a blessed Sunday!
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Date: 9/4/2022 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Edward I’m delighted with the placement in your contest, I know it’s in the extreme, but hey if doing fatalism may as well go all out, cheers David
Date: 8/24/2022 1:31:00 PM
hahaha. Good one!!
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Date: 8/24/2022 2:00:00 PM
Who knows Andrea, AI is almost upon us, we better give them a run for their money, cheers David
Date: 8/21/2022 7:04:00 AM
David, that is a verse that is not only profound but also provokes thought. Your poem, with its intriguing yet imaginative ideas, was enjoyable to read. Indeed, God has endowed us with imagination and intelligence, but if we don't put them to good use, they will wither away and die. However, I believe that you have succeeded magnificently in writing this poem by hitting the bull's eye. The combination of your vivid imagery and sophisticated language has a more spellbinding effect. On your verse.
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Date: 8/21/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, I’m delighted people like yourself enjoyed reading this, and are not offended by my seemingly preposterous imagination, but we do live in a time where computers and machines are relatively nascent, AI is most definitely on the horizon, fusing together with it looks inevitable soon after, I mean what is our ultimate goal, cheers David
Date: 8/20/2022 4:56:00 PM
Enjoyable and engaging poetry, David. I like the imagination (although a possibility of being real) and the creativity in your work. Tha ending made it thought-provoking and thus interesting to me. We know so little and think we know so much, life (and probably death) is a learning experience. Thanks for sharing from you creative mind, Bill
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Date: 8/21/2022 1:04:00 AM
Imagination Bill is all I have to go on, I like to ponder the imponderable, then search for consequences, the time scales involved here are vast, Death to most people is the end, I think it may contain the very answer on how the universe overcomes eternity, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 8/19/2022 12:53:00 PM
The best is knowing that your creator knows how to keep you interested in life. All that we can see now is fatalism….scary stuff. Loved your poem. Excellent questions at the end.
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Date: 8/19/2022 2:09:00 PM
You read my mind Kim, why on earth are we gifted with imagination if we are not meant to use it, A creator I’m guessing must also always have new things to do, to keep eternity fresh, maybe that’s where we come into play, cheers David
Date: 8/18/2022 3:33:00 PM
Brilliant, David. Nowhere near as far fetched as some might think. Like the man said, ‘I’ll be back.’
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Date: 8/18/2022 4:00:00 PM
Inevitability sometimes stares us in the face Terry, and that man keeps coming back, looking a little different but still comes back nonetheless, I just like to get people thinking beyond the box, some will get it, others won’t, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David
Date: 8/18/2022 12:48:00 PM
A very thought provoking verse David, it seems like it's happening now, are we just going around in circle's, so many questions but not many answers. Google fired one of their researchers because he claimed AI had feelings, frightening stuff. Good luck in the contest, Tom
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Date: 8/18/2022 1:08:00 PM
Heya Tom, the cyclical universe theory is definitely one that is becoming more popular with scientists at the moment, I just put a fatalistic element to it, as I like stretching the boundaries of imagination every now and then, without trying to offend peoples genuine faith, AI will probably be a form of evolution, at some point in the future, but feelings are definitely a long way off, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

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