Ode To Spring

O, sweet silence of Spring,
maple seeds rain down and I am
entranced by music from the trees.
Inhaling the fresh mowed grass,
after the drone of the Cub Cadet
I wake myself with a sneeze.

O, sweet silence of spring.
Squirrel scampers building its nest, 
your winds scatter the dandelion.
Blessed you are with no prejudice
regarding weeds and “plants”
watering them all with oblivion.

O, sweet silence of spring,
your rest notes fill in the measures
of the birdsong, the day's invocation.
I rest my eyes on the beautiful 
colors of tulips and peonies, becoming
engrossed in thoughts of renewal.

May 6, 2017
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La France Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Reason congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Ode
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May 22, 2017 at 8:16 PM
I thank you so much, Constance, I love the springtime best of all the seasons. Now on to the P forms and am wondering what will you do with Q? I'm sure you have a plan in mind.
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May 21, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Congrats on your win Reason
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May 8, 2017 at 5:50 PM
REason, I must say this is just about the best poem I have read today. A fave upon thee!!
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May 21, 2017 at 11:22 PM
thanks, Andrea, always appreciate your comments but especially those that come before the judging. My spirit is lifted by your words.
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May 6, 2017 at 10:15 PM
This should do well!
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May 8, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Thanks, Richard, and contest aside, it was a fun write personifying spring.
Gupta Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 8:45 PM
A lovely ode ... Inspiring ...
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May 8, 2017 at 7:14 AM
I appreciate your time and energy, Probir, to read and comment here. I'm kind of getting addicted to these odes. I have always enjoyed Keats' Grecian Urn.
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