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Ode To Spring

O, sweet silence of Spring, maple seeds rain down and I am entranced by music from the trees. Inhaling the fresh mowed grass, after the drone of the Cub Cadet I wake myself with a sneeze. O, sweet silence of spring. Squirrel scampers building its nest, your winds scatter the dandelion. Blessed you are with no prejudice regarding weeds and “plants” watering them all with oblivion. O, sweet silence of spring, your rest notes fill in the measures of the birdsong, the day's invocation. I rest my eyes on the beautiful colors of tulips and peonies, becoming engrossed in thoughts of renewal. May 6, 2017

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Date: 5/22/2017 8:38:00 AM
Reason congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Ode
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Date: 5/22/2017 8:16:00 PM
I thank you so much, Constance, I love the springtime best of all the seasons. Now on to the P forms and am wondering what will you do with Q? I'm sure you have a plan in mind.
Date: 5/21/2017 9:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win Reason
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Date: 5/8/2017 5:50:00 PM
REason, I must say this is just about the best poem I have read today. A fave upon thee!!
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Date: 5/21/2017 11:22:00 PM
thanks, Andrea, always appreciate your comments but especially those that come before the judging. My spirit is lifted by your words.
Date: 5/6/2017 10:15:00 PM
This should do well!
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Date: 5/8/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, and contest aside, it was a fun write personifying spring.
Date: 5/6/2017 8:45:00 PM
A lovely ode ... Inspiring ...
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Date: 5/8/2017 7:14:00 AM
I appreciate your time and energy, Probir, to read and comment here. I'm kind of getting addicted to these odes. I have always enjoyed Keats' Grecian Urn.

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