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Ode To Orpheus and the Magic of His Song

How beautiful the music that he made; his lilting song was carried by the breeze and waves of water, and the lyre he played sent all the birds to singing in the trees. All creatures of the forest he entranced. The magic of his song made them alert, and even rocks nearby the rivers danced, and thus, a river’s course he could divert! Upon his death, how mournful was the song which even then had power to amaze all those who heard its tune floating along the river to the shore. His music stays inside the hearts of those whose words endear us to the magic which they still can hear. Oct. 10, 2017 For John Hamilton's 'Your best sonnet October1-December31,2017' Contest (sorry, my best romance was already a winner in another of your contests!!)

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Date: 4/21/2018 4:27:00 PM
Fabulous poem, Andrea. I love the magical setting and your title. Congrats on your win with this beauty.
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Date: 1/12/2018 10:57:00 AM
Great sonnet, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:46:00 AM
great sonnet sweet lady! congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/10/2018 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your fine win.
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Date: 1/10/2018 9:09:00 PM
I remember this superb sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations for your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:02:00 PM
This is beautifully composed Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Lovely! : )
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:21:00 PM
connie, I feel bad it's not my best sonnet since October, but I had already entered my best one in the last contest the judge posted!! thanks, anyway, It's my second best at least
Date: 1/10/2018 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a fine sonnet and placement!
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Date: 1/10/2018 4:46:00 PM
congratulations dear poet on your placement...sonneteers are like musketeers, all for one, one for all
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Date: 1/10/2018 4:18:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest with your lovely Sonnet. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/17/2017 10:17:00 PM
Wow Andrea! Another win? Do you ever get tired of winning? lol NOT! lol Congrats on this great little poem. I would have loved to hear that lyre.
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Date: 10/16/2017 1:23:00 PM
Coming back with congrats on your top win, Andrea!
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Date: 10/14/2017 4:25:00 PM
"His lilting song was carried by the breeze". Some excellent personification in this poem. Thanks for sharing............peace!
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:59:00 AM
Lovely imagery and flow, Andrea. Congrats on your First Place win! Regards, John.
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Date: 10/14/2017 12:41:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Congrats, Andrea. :)
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Date: 10/13/2017 10:32:00 PM
Andrea - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! I didn't get mine done in time ... too much family drama at present. Loved the classic take to this! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 3:41:00 PM
No matter it is beautiful :) Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:05:00 PM
Returning to congratulate you Andrea on the your fantastic first place win with your wondrous write! Superb!!
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Date: 10/13/2017 11:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful write Andrea... You are really amazing... Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Date: 10/13/2017 8:02:00 AM
When you mentioned you must hurry to enter this contest I knew I was done for Andrea. Such a lovely melodic sonnet. Congratulations on top placement.
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:40:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, a lovely poem :)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:27:00 AM
I loved your traditional sonnet, it flowed so well Andrea.. You do this form very well. A beatuiful doe to a mythical legend.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/12/2017 7:04:00 PM
nice take on the myth. keep up the fine verse peace matthew anish
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Date: 10/12/2017 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful poem that you have here Andrea! So beautiful!
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:08:00 PM
Wonderful write that painted musical lyrics in my mind. Nicely done Andrea...
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Date: 10/11/2017 9:59:00 PM
Hi Andrea, enjoyed this poem! :)
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