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Ode To Earthquake -W

(My ode to Earthquake is an irregular ode. The ode is written in memory of an earthquake that took place in Gujarat State (Kutch Region) of India in the year 2000 on the Republic Day of India on 26th January.) I What a day you chose, Grandma Mine! To quake, to move, to shiver, to shake Thereby to ravage, to savage, to shatter, The celebrations of Mother India Republic Day. A female snake eating her own children! What bad karma those school children had done? What configurations of the planets took place In the natal charts of those thousand killed? II Million years ago you jolted and rocked, Opening up the Atlantic & creating Indian Ocean, Delinking India from Africa and Sri Lanka. Those oceans are widening & the Pacific shrinking. Will North America & Asia drift into each other? The twelve plates* mate and hate each other, Caribbean to Cocos & Indian to Eurasian. Your wanton ways to be taken as blessing in disguise? Your natural acts as great levelers? Or HE made the world to fit best to create & destroy. III On the scene I met a man, a mattress maker by trade Living with parents and two toddlers. With debris under the rickety shelter, The toddlers lay motionless covered with flies. The third did not see the light of the day, Journey made from mother’s womb To that of the earth, Amalgamating from dust to dust, As his wife eight months pregnant Died when the house collapsed. Standing now on the roadside, People throwing food at him from trucks, The mattress maker without a mattress! Brooding over the rigmaroles of the politicians, Remembering armed gangs with choppers, Cutting the fingers of the dead for a gold ring. Feeling the tremors and shocks of the quake, Cries, cracks, quacks fresh in his mind still. Dr. Ram Mehta ======================================== Second place winner IN Contest:In Honor of Constance "Forms of Poetry 101 Today India is celebrating its 64th Independence DAY * There are twelve plates of our Mother Earth. Contest:In Honor of Constance "Forms of Poetry 101 ODE A lengthy lyric poem typically of a serious or meditative nature and having an elevated style and formal stanza structure. A classic ode is structured in three parts: the strophe, the antistrophe, and the epode. Different forms such as the homostrophic ode and the irregular ode also exist. .

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Date: 8/19/2010 10:20:00 PM
So glad this placed high for you, Dr. Ram. Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2010 9:17:00 PM
Many many congrats for this well deserved win. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 8/17/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest " Forms of Poetry 101". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:46:00 AM
congrats on your second place win Dr. Ram
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:09:00 AM
Big congrats on taking second place, Dr. Ram. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram ;) Wilma
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:21:00 PM
Awe inspiring writing. Dr. Ram. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:03:00 PM
congrats Dr Ram..this is a fine poem and I really didnt know what an ode was before. BG
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Poetry Form 101 contest.. another exceptional write and superior win my friend..enjoy your sweet success ..with luv.. caio..luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:20:00 PM
Congratulatins Doctor, on second place in my contest, Forms of Poetry 101. It is very clear that you worked very hard on this poem and you did an excellent job of describing the form ~~
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:31:00 PM
aaah, thats better Doctor, thanks for doing the edit on the breaks, now I do not have to go to India to judge the contest.. Love Constance
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:52:00 PM
WONDERFUL, Dr.Ram. I can see how much you feel deeply for this topic and I love how you said, "mattress maker without a mattress" to show the profound horror of the circumstance. I would rate this one a sure winner if it were in one of my contests. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:36:00 PM
This was very interesting. I didn't know all you relatated. Thanks for your comments on My Magic Window, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/16/2010 11:24:00 AM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Dr. Ram. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:36:00 AM
Wow, the third verse makes the irony and sadness even more powerful, Dr. Ram. It brings a personal touch by explaining the plight of this now homeless family. Excellent poem! Surely a winner. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:52:00 AM
A wonderful piece of poetry in Ode form..Dr. Ram.. u did a marvelous creation and appreciate the reminder of how fragile life is .. enjoyed my friend..with luv from Italy..caio..luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:27:00 AM
You have me laughing after reading your last comment congratulating me on my "will," Dr. Ram. Actually, I've been thinking about writing a will and of course I know what you meant to say. Thanks, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:03:00 AM
Interesting and informative write that drew me in and held my attention..Good luck in the contest..Soup mail..Sara
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:14:00 PM
A very informative piece and well written, Dr. Mehta, goodluck to you on this contest. Thanks for your praise on my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/15/2010 9:17:00 PM
And people of the U.S. think they have it bad. I remember watching the daily rituals unfold in rural Japan for almost three years. Sharing public bath rooms all ages, male female. Absolutely no modesty in natural functions. Sharing public wash rooms, just natural. But very easy to embarrass over a social blunder or in meeting strangers. So beautiful a people. Walking around the rice paddies bare foot in drainage from the toilets. Very good write to digest on a Sunday eve. Bless, Charles
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:26:00 PM
Wow! There's a great bit of history and geography that adds educational insight to the powerful message, Dr. Ram. Odes are difficult to write and if this is your first effort, you succeeded admirably. Well done! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:27:00 PM
rough thoughts... reckon it will happen??? I have wondered if California might fall in the ocean one day.
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