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Ode To Dawn Flower of Cahokia

The air hung swimming with dust motes, throbbing with heat, wringing the sweat form our pores. We walked forward through the soup of ages over trampled grass marked by the passage of buck and doe. The mounds rose above us massive, looming, spirit hands brush our cheeks and pull my hair. The Shaman shushes and shooes. Enfolded in his arms with prayerful hearts; following the parted, knee high grass; moving tentatively upward. Twin hawks fly overhead, spiraling in the tepid updraft. An oval depression appears at the crest of the burial mound. The Kings Mound. Dragon flies buzz through the static charged ether. “Naked, naked, do not profane”. “Naked, naked," the hungry, curious, spirits chant. “So long have we waited for a vessel of knowing. So, long, so, long.” She lay where the doe had lain. He sat as the buck sat vigil. The Shaman’s eyes scanned the horizon. The hawks continued their scout. The sound of the Shaman's flute pierces the atmosphere. Her pulse races to the cries of Kings. “So, long, so long.” Muffled moans melted with the whir of cicada. With the final throbbing note of the flute the distant memory of drums; homage is paid. She arose the bride of Kings; blessed by the ancestors Dawn Flower.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/22/2012 10:57:00 AM
Wow, a slow build to an enchanting, mesmerizing, spellbinding atmosphere!! Happy Thanksgiving and thank you for your comments.
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Date: 7/10/2010 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful write.
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 2:29:00 AM
So magical and spiritual. I was there every step of the way. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Deb. also, I wish to thank you for honouring 'The Devil's Tide' in your contest. I am still working on the re-write in Balled form and want to thank you for inspiring me. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in the Images contest with this wonderful write.. lovely as always .. enjoy your very special honor... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. did u go see my new blog yet with vacation photos posted .. a few from the hundreds taken.. and some of my four sons and three grand babies..so cute too.. enjoy..pupil..
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:26:00 PM
Deborah, this is beautiful! Thank you for directing me to this wonderful poem. Mine was meant more as a knock at the government that betrayed them. It will be among those featured in my new poetry book that comes out in May. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:21:00 PM
This is a rich and beautiful write, Debbie. Your magery is outstanding and the story is transporting. Excellent poetry, my talented friend. Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 2/17/2009 6:02:00 AM
There is power here. Have you read 1491? I'm confused a bit... is that King's possessive or Kings plural? By the way, i was edjicated in Texas but I can stil spel gud. :)
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:17:00 PM
Is this from an Indian Legend? It's beauiful. Thank you for sharing this with me. ~Trudy~
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Date: 2/4/2009 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and story, a joy to read. Judy Riley
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