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October 29, 2023

Contest : October's Story

Sponsored by : Regina McIntosh

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Simmering summer slips away in flaming sun’s fading pathway. In the auburn wasteland fallow, God’s grace gleams in October glow. The whispering woods blush in breeze, swinging in spectrum the tinged trees, that sense autumn’s hued footfall slow, God’s grace gleams in October glow. As an art with gold-plated leaves, aureate splendor autumn weaves. It falls on garden path yellow, God’s grace gleams in October glow. Maroon meadow wears cute crown new, designed by dazzling diamond dew, sparkles with hope for tomorrow, God’s grace gleams in October glow. Ambling in amber dale in flare, I float in fervent stream of air. Feel with divine cadence soul flow, God’s grace gleams in October glow.

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Date: 11/20/2023 6:42:00 AM
Love your imagery Subimal and your subtle use of alliteration is fabulous. Congratulations! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:53:00 PM
Belated thanks, Linda.
Date: 11/19/2023 9:03:00 PM
WOW. Love it. Congrats and many prayers for your blessings to flow. love, Gina
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:52:00 PM
Belated thanks, Regina.
Date: 11/19/2023 6:01:00 PM
Dear Subimal, your rich imagery and alliteration is amazing! Every verse is beautiful but I especially loved "Ambling in amber dale in flare,/I float in fervent stream of air." - poetic enchantment! Congratulations for your win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:52:00 PM
Belated thanks, Susan for your visit and encouraging comments.
Date: 11/19/2023 3:28:00 PM
Subimal, your kyrielle is truly beautiful. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:51:00 PM
Belated thanks, Janice for your nice comment.
Date: 11/19/2023 9:29:00 AM
Congrats Subimal on your win and such a lovely write! The colours and the words are just perfect!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/7/2023 9:51:00 PM
Belated thanks, Krish for your visit and lovely comment.
Date: 10/29/2023 12:47:00 AM
This is beautifully written with vivid imagery fabulous alliteration and purposeful word choice. Good luck in the contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2023 10:00:00 PM
Thank you.

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