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Ocean dreamer



Lay dreaming on the beach
Listening to the ocean roar 
Ecstasy filled my soul with delight
My mind wandered ~
I filled the night's chalice with knots of desire

My heart raced ~ faster
Pulsating beats of rhythm 
To the sound of the ocean 
Splashing vigorously in my mind
Intense heat filled my body

Dripping with sheer ~ delight
My heart missing beats
I learned how to live unkissed, until ...
That night changed everything 
I screamed ~ β€œTie me to your Tongue β€œ

Please, please  ~ I’m begging now
Passed the stage of no return 
Tonight is the night 
Desire ~ becomes fire
It’s raining roses and love riots

Oh ! I feel your tongue caress me
I don’t want this to stop
I can take it ~ more~ more
The moon is an honest Manipulator 
Brighter the moon shone, hotter I became

Is this a dream ~ or reality ?
I don’t wanna wake up 
Feelings of desire, engulf me
Ocean calls me into you
If time turns, will scars stain the sky ?
Copyright Β© | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 11:12 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win.Β Β A great read/write. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win as you go writing away...............
Gibbons Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:04 PM
Thank u dear Paula appreciate your visit. Hope your well. Havea great time week writing ✍️ hugzzz πŸ«‚
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Desire on fire!! Seemed so real; how could it be a dream?! Nicely done, Gershon
Gibbons Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Hi Gershon thank you for reading and your inspiring comment. I appreciate my souo family reading n commenting on my inkπŸ«‚πŸ¦‹
Empress Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:56 PM
I listened to the song so many times dear Dorothy, This is a beautiful poem, so sensuous and romantic And has a soulful touch to it which I absolutely love and admire. I especially love the title and also how youv written "Is this a dream ~ or reality ? I don’t wanna wake up Feelings of desire, engulf me Ocean calls me into you If time turns, will scars stain the sky ?" Wow isnt that how we feel when in love! Your use of all the prompts is very impressive A personal fave this is for me Thank you for sharing Congratulations on your win Sending you light always
Gibbons Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 3:06 AM
Thank you so much for my win I so enjoyed doung something completely different Thank you for running contest im glad I entered. πŸ’‹πŸ«‚πŸ’žπŸŽ΅πŸŽΆ your one poetess who truly inspires me with yoyr ink ✍️ that i can feel depth from your heart n soul.Never ever give up writing the world needs your Ink. Get painting too i know u can so write n paint your deep thoughts. Hugzzz πŸ«‚πŸ’‹
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 1:16 AM
Woahh belated congrats on this romantic sexy poem, expressed superbly. I was shy about posting juicy poems on here like I do elsewhere but poems like these give me courage. Kudos!
Gibbons Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:14 AM
Thank u Zaynab it was 1st time I've written n posted it I believe music I choose for it makes it come alive. Appreciate your encouraging comment .kudos glad it encouraged I check more of your work. πŸ˜‰πŸ«‚πŸ¦‹
M  Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 5:48 AM
Belated Congratulations Dorothy on receiving POTD for this delightful saucy little number haha!! Debx
Gibbons Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Thanks deb nice to see you have a great writing ✍️ day hugzzz πŸ«‚πŸ¦‹
Sharma  Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 2:47 AM
Awwwn gawshhhh this is hot n sizzling πŸ”₯❀️‍πŸ”₯❀️‍πŸ”₯πŸ’‹ yet the amount of emotions that define uncertainties etched with love ... Ah I felt that! As well as the longing! The palpitating heart and how your words flowed ever so seamlessly here "Listening to the ocean roar Ecstasy filled my soul with delight My mind wandered " Ahhh wowzieezzz what can I even say! Everything about this just is very much evocative! and love-filled! And that ending is impeccable.. leaves one thinking.. best of luck for the contest, my sweet Dotti πŸ«‚ πŸ’« 🧚 ooohhhh and I see this one made POTD, ahhmaaaziinnnn CONGRATULATIONS sweetheart, keep shininnnn 🍁 🍁 πŸ§œβ€β™€οΈ πŸ§œβ€β™€οΈ
Gibbons Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Hiya thank u so much you always inspire n encourage me with your love filled comments πŸ’– hugzzz friend πŸ«‚πŸ’–πŸ¦‹βœ¨οΈπŸŒˆπŸŒΉπŸ¦„πŸ’‹πŸ§œβ€β™€οΈπŸ§œβ€β™€οΈπŸ§šπŸ§šβ€β™€οΈπŸ§šβ€β™‚οΈ
George Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 5:42 AM
Ohhh... Here l see a strong surge of desire even more powerful than the ocean waves. So intoxicating and overpowering..Even l feel swept away in its current.....a true burning in the fire of passion. Quite sure, this will be placed high. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD.
Gibbons Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 8:43 AM
Hi Valsa thank u for your inspiration glad you enjoyed my hot πŸ”₯ write ✍️ πŸ˜πŸ« πŸ˜‰βœ¨οΈ have a blessed week hugzzz friend πŸ«‚πŸ¦‹πŸ’‹
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Wish you did fabulously with using perhaps all the given prompts?? Love this. I bet it ranks really high . Oh and a POTD as well. Congrats
Gibbons Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:47 AM
Thank you my friend Andrea I must say i did enjoy using all prompts . Glad you enjoyed it music makes it come more alive too. So enjoying adding my musical arrangements to my lyrics πŸŽΆπŸ§œβ€β™€οΈπŸ«‚πŸ¦‹
Scragg Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Beautiful enhancement of the romance with the music Dorothy 🎢 πŸ˜‰βœ¨οΈ Another wonderful masterpiece merger of music and lyrics while shining your amazing talent and ear for music 🎢 🎡 love the way your music builds with the moment 🌹✨️ Each piece you create a unique surprise β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‰
Gibbons Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:50 AM
Well thank you dear natasha my wonderful forever friend and encourager I appreciate all you say about my poems n musical arrangement. When I listen back when finished blows my own mind at how it makes the lyrics come alive n dance xxx hugssss have a blessed Sunday πŸ«‚πŸ¦‹πŸŽ΅πŸŽΆπŸŒ³πŸ’‹πŸ’œ
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 3:25 PM
Oh, my gosh (I said that aloud while typing it and simultaneously noticed this made POTD. I love it when a poem truly fits the honor and this does.) Now that your poem has caused me a certain kind of body discomfort while also setting my poetry love on 'pulse', I'm going to get some ice cream. CayCay
Gibbons Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:55 AM
Thank you Cay Cay for the depth u felt in my writing my muse was on fireπŸ”₯β˜„οΈ lol then just arranged it to music yesterday i feel it sets it more on fire β˜„οΈπŸ”₯. Hope you enjoyed your ice cream n cooled you down 😜 happy sunday hugzzz πŸ«‚
Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderfulΒ  "Ocean dreamer" write. Sorry I am late reading this one. I have Not been on the computer as much as I was. Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
Gibbons Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:56 AM
Thank you dear Paula for your encouraging comment glad you enjoyed it hugzzz πŸ«‚ have a blessed Sunday ✍️
Nicole Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 6:36 PM
' Desire ~ becomes fire, it’s raining roses. ' An intense moment, for sure, and such a breathtaking image to behold. Congratulations Dorothy, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Gibbons Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Hi sweet Brandy thank u for your inspiring comment .have a great September hugzzz friendπŸ«‚ 🌹
Anaya Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations Miss Dorothy on an outstanding Poem of the day! Enjoy, my dear poetessπŸ₯³ . 🌹 . . 🌹 . . 🌹. 🌹 . . ..🌹 .
Gibbons Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 9:40 AM
Thank you 😊
Hind Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:57 PM
congrats on POTD, !! 🌹
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:06 PM
Thank u Paige happy September 🧑hugz
Kauffman Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:05 PM
Dorothy, what a poetic gift you have written. Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings to you!
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Hi Sam thank u for your encouragement have a gr8 September βœ¨πŸŒ™hugz
La France Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:46 PM
Dorothy, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ⭐
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Thank u Constance appreciate your comments happy September hugzzz πŸ«‚πŸ¦‹πŸ’“
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:29 PM
- A wonderful poem, Dorothy :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:50 PM
Thank u sweet Anne-Lise nice to see you hope ur well as I had bad fibro flare up 48 hrs couldn't move but I'm a viking warrior my Norwegian blood πŸ’– my heart broken for the death of your wonderful King his heart was gold πŸ’› hugzzz my friend 🧑 happy September 🌹
Rodgers Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Dear Dorothy, Congrats on POTD that is an intensely passionate and intoxicating piece of verse! Your imagery throughout is wonderfully evocative. Leaving me hovering right on that edge between a fever dream and absolute reality. It’s a bold, beautifully uninhibited, and atmospheric contest entry! Blessings, Daniel
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Daniel for your very inspiring comment . Thought I'd try different kinda write ✍️ πŸ˜„ didn't expect POTD so I'm well pleased πŸ™Œ have a great September πŸ˜€ hugzz friend πŸ«‚πŸŽΆ
DiMino Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations! "My heart raced ~ faster Pulsating beats of rhythm To the sound of the ocean Splashing vigorously in my mind Intense heat filled my body" -- beautifully said. Desire, poetry is like that~ a racehorse at the gate, awaiting the Buzzer Tongue.
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:07 AM
Thank u Joseph for your inspiring comment that made me smile thanks for congratulations too I smiled even bigger with POTD I'm honoured πŸ₯°have a great day hugzzz friend πŸ«‚
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 6:05 AM
It's raining kudos of compliments for you today, Dotti. Congratulations on your lines being recognized as POTD.⭐ I see you...Love your avatar!!
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:18 AM
Hey my miss America πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Έ thank u for all inspiration you give me β€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή you like my Charlie bear in my aviator he's special Scottish 🏴󠁧󠁒󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 one he's da cutest called Hamish ❀️ I worked in toy shop once I managed it for owner. My downfall Bought a few Charlie bears 🐻 one I got called dreamer coz I've always been a dreamer. Thus I got POTD for a hott πŸ”₯dream ha ha πŸ˜‚hugzzz πŸ«‚ 🌹
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 4:23 AM
fabulous contest entry....congrats, too, with your POTD designation.
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:20 AM
Thank u Sara for congratulations it was a surprise but made me smile πŸ˜ƒ have a great September
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:31 AM
Dorothy, a wonderful captivating poem, full of excitement and passion, those are the best dreams. 😊 Congratulations on POTD!
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:23 AM
Thank u sweet Tania πŸ˜‹ I've been called a dreamer all my life well ✨️ paid off πŸ™Œ I was so surprised I got POTD for it... thank u for your inspiring comment hugzzz πŸŒΉβ€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:26 AM
Yay! Congratulations on POTD, Dorothy! Very nicely written!
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:31 AM
Well thank u Charles for your kind comment πŸ˜„ on my POTD I've always been called a wee dreamer πŸ˜‚ mayby should write ✍️ more dreams 😴 πŸ˜‚. I sure don't need any help from AI I got such a vivid imagination n always write from heart n soul. Like u do too πŸ˜ƒ hugs πŸ«‚ friend
Scragg Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:16 AM
Huge Congrats Dorothy πŸ‘ πŸ™Œ πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ a well deserved honour!! β™₯οΈβ€οΈπŸŒΉπŸ§ΈπŸ¦„βœ¨οΈπŸ’–βœ¨οΈπŸ¦’πŸ«‚
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Well thank u dear Natasha I was gobsmacked to get POTD for sure big smiles πŸ˜ƒ guess should try some more from my dreamers heart ❀️ πŸ˜‚ ✍️ hugzzz friend πŸ«‚ πŸ¦‹
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Hello Dorothy Gibbons :-) Enjoyed read! Congratulations to you on your very nice POTD! Have a wonderful day ~ AA
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Thank u AA for your encouraging comment appreciate have a wonderful September hugs
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