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"We ourselves feel that what we are doing is just a drop in the ocean. But the ocean would be less because of that missing drop". Mother Teresa
Moonlight shimmers on the phlegmatic ocean. Creating a whimsical billow of prose. On the zenith of the print's folds, as spoken. The carol "Induces Sleep" by Seas' Compose With a sweep of waves, echoing your passion. Gloom made him unwise; life was a growing rose. Red-colored ripples amidst the white-blue foam The moments are short, and my love is now home. Seeing the crest of crimson sunset ripple  The azure ocean disappears after night. And each time I get adjacent, I whistle. It's a cool way, yet tough in a high stake fight. Earth is waning, and all are growing little. I can't cross the lines, and wait for morning light. Body, blood, and anguish are racing on board.  Rainbow prism waves tendril moist to kiss the chord. Checked by: HMS.COM/ 11 syllables per line--Rhyme; abababcc-dededeff Written: March 24, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - 'O' Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:29:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:31:00 PM
Enjoying reading your poem It is so nice. Congratulations on your great winning in this contest.
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Date: 3/26/2023 7:51:00 PM
Back to your profound poem, deep as the ocean, with Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 3/26/2023 2:56:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:07:00 PM
Wow - lovely imagery Las. Congratulations on your win!:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:36:00 PM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem. I love your image, music and quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:55:00 AM
"Seeing the crest of crimson sunset ripple The azure ocean disappears after night." I am trying to visualize the crimson sunset and the rippling azure ocean. Lovely penning. All the Best my friend.
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Date: 3/25/2023 7:09:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, You've penned a well-written and poetic piece about the ocean. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/25/2023 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful, Lasaad. Best of luck!
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:55:00 PM
- A beautiful description, Las - (love the quote by Mother Teresa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:17:00 PM
Lovely picture of the ocean, but just a note, an ottava rima is supposed to have eleven syllables per line per the PS definition
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle, much appreciate your comment and syllables count.
Date: 3/25/2023 7:10:00 AM
Such beautiful words Lasaad! Debx
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