Ocean

As I sail adrift on the ocean blue, I feel calm and at peace. Then I notice two dolphins doing flips in the crystal blue water. As the sunlight shines down on the mesmerizing sea. The aroma of azure waves is so refreshing to my soul. I feel so safe and at home as I roam the ocean blue. There is no place that takes my breath away such as this. 09/23/2021 Contest: “ O” New Poems Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 7:33:00 AM

Alexis, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2021 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations to you dear Alexis, this is such a refreshing write, it cleanses the soul. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/27/2021 10:46:00 AM

What a wonderful sense of delight and awe your words convey Alexis! Nicely done! Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/25/2021 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win Alexis, you deserve it with this wonderfully penned poem.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/25/2021 3:20:00 AM

This is a great time to share that one of the major changes responsible for my "disappearance." I moved to Florida and have the Atlantic ocean practically in my back yard. The multiple joys of living in a tropical state are beautifully expressed in your poem. Great imagery. ...CayCay

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/24/2021 10:44:00 PM

Grat imagery. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/24/2021 1:41:00 PM

So beautifully mesmerizing.... Congratulations.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/23/2021 11:28:00 PM

Stupendous write, Alexis:) about the book, "Not my will", did you finish it? Your thoughts...?

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/25/2021 12:27:00 AM

Hi Jo, What happens to Eleanor and Chad? Do you they married? Young Eleanor suffered much loss; first, her dear parents and then her Aunt Ruth. I think her aunt was going to change the will but passed away before got a chance to rewrite it.

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/24/2021 6:55:00 AM

Hi Jo, Thank you so much. As far as the book goes, I am almost done. I’ll let you know my thoughts when I am finished:-)Alexis

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/23/2021 6:21:00 PM

Lovely imaginary poetry Alexis, a scenic view of sailing on the ocean blue… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 4:35:00 PM

I highly agree. The ocean is marvelous. Well done!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2021 3:30:00 PM

Exquisite images you painted, Alexis. All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2021 1:04:00 PM

wonderful imagery Alexis I love poems about the sea xx

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/23/2021 11:13:00 AM

I can relate to this. Around Malta is all sea and we occasionally see a dolphin or two. Lovely poem. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/23/2021 11:05:00 AM

Hello Alexis Y.,You made me feel like I should have been there. To be by the water would be wonderful. I miss the sound of the waves rushing to shore. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/23/2021 10:23:00 AM

There is no better place to be Alexis, hope you are keeping well. Good luck in the contest. Tom