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Oblivious To Pain

The twilight of my dreams, ends at the dawn of my fears When this day of reckoning, comes with its intrusion of pain, from you I've learned to live, with the cold eyes of your concerns, hid behind the mask you wear The end of our relationship will come slowly and its pain brief I hold no righteous side in this parting, as I opened my trust to your hands, without any knowledge of who you were. You have expressed your views and I know this day I will hurt, yet, I will become one, with the instrument chosen to inflict my discomfort, while searching the room for any escape, from the bright lighted chair of your chosen profession, dentistry. 5/5/17 contest Form O-only one sponsor..Broken Wings

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Date: 6/5/2017 6:35:00 PM
The second read puts everything into perspective in this wonderful and clever write
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/5/2017 6:50:00 PM
yes it was meant to be humorous
Date: 5/22/2017 8:47:00 AM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
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Date: 5/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
very clever
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