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Oblivion

there is no art in oblivion lack of consciousness not still, but empty time passing as cease to be present no thought is given to those that remember each and e v e r y second wishful thinking, wishful thinking wake up, wake up, wake up those who choose oblivion don't want to be there, whether there or not so lonely watching on or waiting because all the t i m e you feel alone anyway because time stops when you are left with oblivion

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Date: 1/15/2024 6:22:00 AM
- Thought provoking ending, great poem D.D. - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise - it was an interesting concept to consider x
Date: 1/14/2024 9:13:00 PM
"time stops when you are left with oblivion" - Experiential truth beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:14:00 AM
Many thanks, much appreciated
Date: 1/14/2024 4:51:00 PM
Dilly, wonderfully penned poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:15:00 AM
Much appreciated, thank you x
Date: 1/2/2024 3:57:00 AM
Exactly Dilly time and life have no meaning inside oblivion, I believe it’s an impossible state just like before being born, we can only perceive life by being alive, loneliness too can be a horrible consequence and perspective of being alive, not quite oblivion, yet interminably worse, you’re on the cusp again, brilliantly written, cheers David
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Date: 1/2/2024 4:50:00 AM
Hurray! *Claps like seal* Oh hang on, actually I was nodding sagely... :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/2/2024 4:17:00 AM
Beyond clever, a unique mind of new concepts and backed up with fresh aspects of approach!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/2/2024 4:04:00 AM
Thank you David, you make me feel very clever :)

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