Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Oblivion -

~ oblivion - an assault against the memories ~ 
                                                                quote by poet

           the tears dried before the sun rose
           return the grief on paper wings
           let everything fly lost in the blue sky
           ~ no time to hesitate
           though in terrible wonder
                              ~ oblivion as distracts
           a place completely without a facade
           passion never touches her string
           ~ an evanescent illusion
                "if you need me, call and I'll come"
           in the paleness of the moonlight she waits



           24.03.2023
           Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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           - 'O' Words Poetry Contest -
           Sponsored by: Constance La France
          1st place in the contest

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Emilia James April 5, 2023 at 11:09 AM Congratulations on your win Sunshine. Emilia : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2023 at 2:39 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Emilia :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues March 27, 2023 at 3:57 AM a place completely without a facade passion never touches her string…sobering, dear Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:19 AM - Kim, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George March 26, 2023 at 8:10 PM 'Oblivion is a place completely without a facade and it waits in the paleness of moonlight'..... ! Such apt description. Congratulations dear Smile. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:18 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Heidi Sands March 26, 2023 at 5:25 PM Great poem and I love the ending. Congratulations :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:18 AM - Many thanks for reading and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs

Joseph May March 26, 2023 at 3:14 PM Dropping back with Congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:17 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Alexis Y. March 26, 2023 at 2:58 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:17 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler March 26, 2023 at 1:11 PM Sweet sweetness Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win!:) hugs and blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:16 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations on my - "O" poem, Linda :) - hugs

Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 12:38 PM Sunshine, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your creative poem. I love the image and your quote also, blessings, Constance Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:15 AM - Many thanks for my win in your contest, Constance :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta March 25, 2023 at 11:56 PM Too tough to go through this difficult word. But really well done. Sure to win Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:14 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Alexis Y. March 25, 2023 at 7:14 PM Hi Anne-Lise, You did a good job with your chosen word. It's a hard word to write about but I think you did a good job describing it. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:14 AM - Hi Alexis, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet March 25, 2023 at 2:21 PM It would be wonderful if somebody from oblivion would wait and then come right back, Anne-Lise. A poem that is really well written. Best of luck, Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:13 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Mike Gentile March 25, 2023 at 12:10 PM A sense of abandonment and desperation runs through your terrific imagery Anne-Lise! Quite a write!! Happy Saturday xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:13 AM - Many thanks Mike, for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Jack Horne March 25, 2023 at 8:33 AM love this imaginative write Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:12 AM - Jack, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 24, 2023 at 11:11 PM It's delightful if someone in oblivion waits and comes back. Nicely penned poem. Good luck, SS. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:12 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Subimal :) - hugs

Daniel Turner March 24, 2023 at 7:31 PM Nice job, Anne. Very hard word to describe. Good luck. Have a great weekend:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:12 AM - Many thanks Daniel, for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 24, 2023 at 6:53 PM Wow I felt oblivious devotion, and unhappiness subsided by the hope offered by a new day. Don't tell me I am wrong, cause your poem sent me to oblivion and back and I like it that way. Excellent writing Ann-Lise. You are a master of saying a lot in a few words. That is a talent. Best wishes Wen. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:11 AM - Wendy, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 24, 2023 at 3:24 PM Dear Anne-Lise, as I mentioned before…each of your poems make me ponder…excellent choice of theme for the contest! Hugs ~ Mala Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 11:11 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Mala :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham March 24, 2023 at 2:15 PM A great choice for the contest Anne, thought provoking verse too Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 2:23 PM - Many thanks, Tom - I wish you a lovely weekend ... hope the sun shines :) ... here it is rain, rain and even more rain :) - hugs

Joseph May March 24, 2023 at 1:31 PM Very well crafted Anne, I love the second line, hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 1:53 PM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk March 24, 2023 at 1:05 PM I just learned a new word today from you. And wow! Sunshine, it’s smackin’ creepy awesome! I love it! :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 1:52 PM - Me too, Fin...never heard that word before :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2023 at 12:33 PM So poetic and a hard word to describe Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 12:47 PM - Oblivion ... a word that was new to my English skills ... I had to google it, Andrea :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Michelle Faulkner March 24, 2023 at 12:19 PM Oblivion is indeed a terrible wonder, well put, best wishes for the contest~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes, Michelle :) - hugs

Margarita Lillico March 24, 2023 at 11:45 AM Love the quote!!! Great entry! Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2023 at 11:50 AM - Thank you, Margarita :) - hugs