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Blessed ... This was a day unlike any other The sun arose and stole my breath Oh, I have seen countless such day-wakes Here on this shore, ancient, sparkling ... Each one unique and a miracle of color Making the moon blush with a goodnight kiss But this morn there were hues beyond my imaginings and memories And it seems fitting now that it should have been so That every moment on this day be priceless ... Every minute spent here with my love, as perfect as it could be Every smile and laugh and kiss and tear, perfection Each breath an exquisite drama, every touch a blessing And if that is only in my perception, it matters not This farewell to humanity ... These last moments - more precious than any that came before For our eyes behold the culmination ... The death throes of an extraordinary race - a race and existence, sublime That brought to fruition the best of art and acumen And ultimately, its own undoing ... I am content, as I watch the sky turn to fire I am blessed here, in my love's embrace A full, passionate, extraordinary life ... for both of us And there is an incredible beauty to this sky Flaming, churning mushroom clouds in the distance ... And more colors I've not imagined, an intense and powerful image The streaming rainbows of fire and fission Consuming themselves and all that they sweep upon It seems right that it be so ... That the end of man come in such consummate fascination ... And such treacherous bloom ... We go out with a scream and a tremble, not a whisper in the night And I am with the one I love, true and true ... The one who has shared all of life and love with me The one who took my breath and heart, all those years ago ... I shall swim the dark water of her eyes, as I did then And feel its grasp on my being I will kiss her as deep as doom ... While thunder and flame and terrifying beauty Consume us ... Consume all. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "What If There Was No Tomorrow" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 10th Place ~ in the "Doomsday Clock Two Minutes To Midnight" Poetry Contest, Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/30/2019 3:46:00 PM
"Each breath an exquisite drama" This is very true for folks like me with PHA. So beautiful like every though you express as no others quite can do. Congrats dear friend
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Date: 8/25/2019 8:42:00 AM
.....almost makes you wanna shout.....OH YEAH.....SIGN ME UP.......GREAT WRITE GREG.....masterfully done.
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Date: 8/25/2019 1:21:00 AM
Wow Greg, you went all out for this contest! Congratulations on your much deserved Gold Medal honor! xoo : )
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Date: 8/24/2019 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/24/2019 7:33:00 PM
you write so beautifully, like no other can, never surprised to see your poems with top wins... congrats on the win with another gorgeous write!
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Date: 8/24/2019 1:34:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on this majestic write as only you can do, another worthy winner!
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Date: 8/24/2019 11:11:00 AM
just beautiful dear Gregory, well deserved! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/24/2019 8:39:00 AM
- Beautifully written ... but, give me some goosebumps ... wooow ... - Congratulations on your win, Gregory - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2019 7:08:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top-tier win, Greg!:-) Stunning offering from you, as usual...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2019 6:20:00 AM
You are always so kind, Edward, thanks so much, my friend! :o)
Date: 8/24/2019 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Greg. The line that popped out at me as I read and re-read your piece, "And if that is only in my perception, it matters not This farewell to humanity …" Perception the leveler of all debates in the end.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2019 6:20:00 AM
Many thanks to you, RAP, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings! :o)
Date: 8/24/2019 3:27:00 AM
I can relate to your poem Greg, just like Nette's poem this took me on a journey, feeling the emotions expressed vividly... last stanza sums up your poem, regardless of fate, you will still never forget love... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/10/2019 6:19:00 AM
Thank you SO much for this placement, Silent One, it means a lot to me! This kind of "Armageddon" poetry is not always embraced, but I think, as with all tragedies, the worst of circumstance brings out the best of humanity, and puts what's truly important - LOVE - into its proper perspective. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 2/27/2018 6:56:00 AM
Such a sad write...written in death! Congratulations, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim! :-) <3
Date: 2/26/2018 12:05:00 PM
This one somehow I missed but I see the contest was kind to this entry, I agree with Cay Cay, if there was an ending as you depicted how wonderful to spend the last moments in the arms of your beloved, reminds me of the old couple on the bed embraced as the Titanic sank. I on the other hand believe God will step in before humans destroy themselves. Enjoyed as per usual!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, John, I greatly appreciate it, friend! This does not reflect any personal beliefs of mine, it's just a "what-if" ... my own views on the end of the world are much different. Blessings! :-)
Date: 2/26/2018 12:04:00 PM
I love your take on this 'end of our world' theme, Gregory. At the certain end of anything, all we have is acceptance and the final blessing of remembering the joys and wonders we were granted. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, I'm so pleased you liked it! I like to think that I would adopt such an attitude if certain end was near, though it would be hard to not feel abject terror instead ... but really, what else is important at such a time, if not the love and joys and blessings we've known! :-) <3
Date: 2/26/2018 10:38:00 AM
Back with most deserved congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line - so appreciated!
Date: 2/20/2018 9:11:00 PM
The most scary, beautiful, romantic, chilling doomsday write here...fascinating the feelings your pen evokes...Great write.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:25:00 PM
That's such a wonderful and heartfelt comment, Rhoda, thank you so very much, Friend ... blessings! I'm glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 2/20/2018 8:23:00 PM
Knocked it WAY OUT OF THE PARK !!! Amazing concept exquisitely executed, Gregory. Bravo.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:23:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Line, I so appreciate the comments, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2018 3:38:00 PM
My goodness, beauty in the end of the world with those churning mushroom clouds. what a picture you painted, Greg. Wonderful entry for that contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:21:00 PM
Very kind of you to say so, Andrea ... thank you so much! :-)
Date: 2/20/2018 1:15:00 PM
You went where I did for those final moments, into the arms of your loved one. I love how you encompassed all elements in this: mankind, sights, philosophy, romantic love - I could go on because this is not singular in focus, but all consuming as such final moments would be (yes, made an unintentional pun). I enjoyed it very much, Gregory, very much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:20:00 PM
Thank you SO very much, CayCay, this is such a wonderful comment, my friend, and I'm so pleased you liked my poem! (And I liked the pun, lol) Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2018 6:28:00 AM
Amazing last two stanzas ... enjoyed reading ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/21/2018 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir!

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