Nurturing My Lovely Children

I nestled her… dear January child
My arms her manger on a night beguiled.
Those pink fingers twitching to feel new dawn
As long hours of labor seemed quite undone,
When babe mildly chuckled, I wept with mirth
For heaven’s gift …this miracle of birth,

Then to race on woods picking flowers, aglow
Playful a youngster’s seasons  like a river’s flow,
Enchanting girlhood days prepared to learn
Of adventures where she tried to discern;
The meaning of right from wrong, and uphold
Values from home,school… her years growing bold.

Now at nineteen, Camille reaches to life
Balancing the grace of pleasure and torn strife.
O I love how she nurtures her own fire 
Remaining steady with a heart’s desire,
To follow new adult’s path…kind yet gritty,
My January child, the breath that’s me.


2/25/2016
My Lovely Children Contest for Laura Loo
Inspiration from the mother of my dear godchild 
and niece, Camille
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations Nette on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful.
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:41 AM
The breath that's me, great line. Congratulations!
Cheema Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:20 AM
Beautifully expressed Nette! Co grats on your placement!
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February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Milliner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Yes Nette, they grow so fast, but the memories of their childhood will forever last!! Congratulation on your win!!
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette - I adore the name Camille is it so pretty:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:18 PM
I'll bet she's as beautiful as her mother, inside and out. A very warm write from mother's love. Congratulations , nette. A well deserving write for your win.
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:14 PM
This is lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Nette..."I nestled her… dear January child My arms her manger on a night beguiled." Perfect verse. Congrats on your top placement and thank you for your entry :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 10:05 AM
I believe that a mother/daughter bond has no match in the human equation. Theirs is a love that's totally remarkable, and so self evident in this poem. Emile. #7
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February 25, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Sweet and moving, Nette! Janice
Marty Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 5:43 AM
I felt the deep connection of mother and child in the your exquisite poem and found it touching. Love begets love! Thank you for reading me.
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February 25, 2016 at 4:12 AM
- Henry Ward Beecher, has written a great line that I will share with you Nette : "Children are the hands that we seize heaven with" - A beautiful poem, good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onat Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 4:06 AM
Excellent! I hope my 7-year old daughter comes close to this kind of growing-up years. Cheering for you on your many recent wins!
Conte Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 4:02 AM
Your sense of endearment allows me to take have a glimpse of a child growing up to stretch her wings. Indeed, an astonishing poem from a sensitive poetess.
Manassian Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 3:27 AM
Beautiful, dear....I loved the ending..."the breath that's me". You have such a way with words, Nette....They dance and frolic, dear. My daughter is the best thing that has ever happened to me...Hugs and thanks for the visit.
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