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Nurturing My Lovely Children

I nestled her… dear January child My arms her manger on a night beguiled. Those pink fingers twitching to feel new dawn As long hours of labor seemed quite undone, When babe mildly chuckled, I wept with mirth For heaven’s gift …this miracle of birth, Then to race on woods picking flowers, aglow Playful a youngster’s seasons like a river’s flow, Enchanting girlhood days prepared to learn Of adventures where she tried to discern; The meaning of right from wrong, and uphold Values from home,school… her years growing bold. Now at nineteen, Camille reaches to life Balancing the grace of pleasure and torn strife. O I love how she nurtures her own fire Remaining steady with a heart’s desire, To follow new adult’s path…kind yet gritty, My January child, the breath that’s me. 2/25/2016 My Lovely Children Contest for Laura Loo Inspiration from the mother of my dear godchild and niece, Camille

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Date: 2/27/2016 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful.
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:41:00 AM
The breath that's me, great line. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2016 5:20:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Nette! Co grats on your placement!
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:47:00 PM
Yes Nette, they grow so fast, but the memories of their childhood will forever last!! Congratulation on your win!!
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:32:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette - I adore the name Camille is it so pretty:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:18:00 PM
I'll bet she's as beautiful as her mother, inside and out. A very warm write from mother's love. Congratulations , nette. A well deserving write for your win.
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:14:00 PM
This is lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:08:00 PM
Nette..."I nestled her… dear January child My arms her manger on a night beguiled." Perfect verse. Congrats on your top placement and thank you for your entry :)-luloo
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:05:00 AM
I believe that a mother/daughter bond has no match in the human equation. Theirs is a love that's totally remarkable, and so self evident in this poem. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:11:00 AM
Sweet and moving, Nette! Janice
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Date: 2/25/2016 5:43:00 AM
I felt the deep connection of mother and child in the your exquisite poem and found it touching. Love begets love! Thank you for reading me.
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:12:00 AM
- Henry Ward Beecher, has written a great line that I will share with you Nette : "Children are the hands that we seize heaven with" - A beautiful poem, good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:06:00 AM
Excellent! I hope my 7-year old daughter comes close to this kind of growing-up years. Cheering for you on your many recent wins!
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:02:00 AM
Your sense of endearment allows me to take have a glimpse of a child growing up to stretch her wings. Indeed, an astonishing poem from a sensitive poetess.
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Date: 2/25/2016 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful, dear....I loved the ending..."the breath that's me". You have such a way with words, Nette....They dance and frolic, dear. My daughter is the best thing that has ever happened to me...Hugs and thanks for the visit.
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