Arthur Vaso Poet Couplet

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Number 2

Impressive
Vice presidential

Walking on lily pads
Sinking within illusions

Snow drops bloom
Wisdom is waking

Darkness fades
Light pervades

We all seek to be one
Destiny sometimes makes us number two

Quite the topic to contemplate
As I wander off to the loo


Notes
As they say a pence for your thoughts
Amazing how see end up right where they belong!

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Christi Bellville February 23, 2018 at 12:48 AM Thank you for sharing this, I liked how it flowed, and understood your message, that is what a poem is suppose to do, convey a thought you have in a new way with old words! Great work!

Kai Michael Neumann February 20, 2018 at 1:05 AM Very funny Arthur.

Sara Ella February 19, 2018 at 11:19 PM Congratulations Art :)

White Wolf February 19, 2018 at 10:32 PM Great Bear, you have done it again! Congrats, my friend!

Ronald A. Williams February 19, 2018 at 4:23 PM Nice poem: But as a Christian I believe it is not our place to judge anyone as Jesus says not to do so. We can always note the right and wrong but we are commanded to pray for people. Leave the judging to the Lord, if that person is right or wrong as an individual. Blessings

Tim Smith February 19, 2018 at 2:59 PM How awesome is this my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2018 at 11:38 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 19, 2018 at 11:24 AM Many congratulations on Pots, a very worthy acolade:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 19, 2018 at 7:42 AM Love your mind dear poet :) congratulations on potd! xomo

James Swartz February 19, 2018 at 6:50 AM Congratulations on POTD Arthur! I can only dream of being 2, destiny makes me 200,000 at best every time.

Arturo Michael February 19, 2018 at 4:10 AM What eyes fail to see and mouth refuse to talk hands will write...Love your take on this subject...All the best Arthur

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2018 at 6:56 PM Funny note there. MY Thoughts? No tengo nada!! But I love seeing your poetry today!

Eve Roper February 18, 2018 at 2:46 PM Jan, is right.. no matter how kind they are when a chance to succeed and more pay they will only have tunnel vision to succeed no matter who they hurt.I have only found one in my life and she step aside so I could have the job... She was and is an angel..

Jan Allison February 18, 2018 at 11:54 AM It takes a lot of hard work to get to the top and someone will always be waiting in the wings to obtain such glory and dont care who they trample on to succeed:-( hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman February 18, 2018 at 5:58 AM Hello Art!! Vice Presidential, eh?? I really like your couplet here and all of the imagery-laden verses. (A Great Photo too!!) A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary