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Impressive Vice presidential Walking on lily pads Sinking within illusions Snow drops bloom Wisdom is waking Darkness fades Light pervades We all seek to be one Destiny sometimes makes us number two Quite the topic to contemplate As I wander off to the loo Notes As they say a pence for your thoughts Amazing how see end up right where they belong!

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Date: 2/23/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this, I liked how it flowed, and understood your message, that is what a poem is suppose to do, convey a thought you have in a new way with old words! Great work!
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Date: 2/20/2018 1:05:00 AM
Very funny Arthur.
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations Art :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:32:00 PM
Great Bear, you have done it again! Congrats, my friend!
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Date: 2/19/2018 4:23:00 PM
Nice poem: But as a Christian I believe it is not our place to judge anyone as Jesus says not to do so. We can always note the right and wrong but we are commanded to pray for people. Leave the judging to the Lord, if that person is right or wrong as an individual. Blessings
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:59:00 PM
How awesome is this my friend
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:24:00 AM
Many congratulations on Pots, a very worthy acolade:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:42:00 AM
Love your mind dear poet :) congratulations on potd! xomo
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Date: 2/19/2018 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Arthur! I can only dream of being 2, destiny makes me 200,000 at best every time.
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Date: 2/19/2018 4:10:00 AM
What eyes fail to see and mouth refuse to talk hands will write...Love your take on this subject...All the best Arthur
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Date: 2/18/2018 6:56:00 PM
Funny note there. MY Thoughts? No tengo nada!! But I love seeing your poetry today!
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Date: 2/18/2018 2:46:00 PM
Jan, is right.. no matter how kind they are when a chance to succeed and more pay they will only have tunnel vision to succeed no matter who they hurt.I have only found one in my life and she step aside so I could have the job... She was and is an angel..
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:54:00 AM
It takes a lot of hard work to get to the top and someone will always be waiting in the wings to obtain such glory and dont care who they trample on to succeed:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:58:00 AM
Hello Art!! Vice Presidential, eh?? I really like your couplet here and all of the imagery-laden verses. (A Great Photo too!!) A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
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