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Numb With Loss

Sitting under the old willow tree, shedding a few memory tears, wondering when time will heal, my poor heartbrokenness, you're gone forever. Now I'll see you no more. Numb; death, you've won.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 6/3/2023 6:50:00 PM

There are no winner's in death, unless Mother Nature knows something we don't. Wipe your tears, Jesus may have been a glitch, (resurrection) but a good one!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/3/2023 6:17:00 AM

With great passion and eloquence, your writing exudes poignant emotion. You consistently capture the essence of feeling.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2023 3:48:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor. How emotional and expressive is this and your words. Very. Always do you capture the emotive factor. And yes, what a wonderful execution with the nonet format. Have a beautiful and peaceful day and weekend. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile) PS - I hope you know the worth of your work Victor.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/3/2023 3:04:00 AM

The song says you'll meet again, and I am sure its right. Dont know where, dont know when, but He will let you meet again, some sunny day.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/2/2023 3:22:00 PM

It feels like death won, but only in the physical world. Your still together spiritually, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, Victor. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Judy Ball

Date: 6/2/2023 2:45:00 PM

Beautifully expressed and well spoken my friend. However, Death never wins anymore for the true Believer because Jesus conquered Death for us once and for all. She waits for you on the other side. God Bless my friend. JB

Charles Messina

Date: 6/2/2023 4:57:00 AM

Great poetry, Victor. I know you have visited that willow tree many a time. She may be gone but she will always be with you, my friend. Lovely!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/1/2023 9:23:00 PM

Know that we are all for ever connected vibrationally, Victor. Body dies, soul lives on as self-existent living light eternal

Valsa George

Date: 6/1/2023 7:34:00 PM

The sad separation of your loved one seems to haunt you always ! We all hope that we will be united with our dear ones at the other shore, never to be separated. Let this hope comfort you....

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/1/2023 5:16:00 PM

only for a short time when the final day comes we will be welcomed with open arms, from the ones who loved us most :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/1/2023 2:38:00 PM

I don’t think it heals…we cope, somehow. Hugs ~ Kim P.S. Death doesn’t win…christ was and is the Victor! One day we will celebrate when we are reunited with our loved ones.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/1/2023 1:36:00 PM

Dear Victor death never wins, you’ll see your love when you receive your angel wings and for you two heaven’s bells will ring… Belle

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/1/2023 1:35:00 PM

I understand your pain Victor, and that overwhelming numb feeling death is the absolute end, I do try tackle these dark issues in my poems, and am leaning more towards life and death as perpetually cyclical, not to give myself hope, but because I see it in the abstract nature of eternity, an excellent nonet, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2023 1:13:00 PM

this is short and yet you pack a wallop of emotion into it. GREAT nonet writing, Victor.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/1/2023 1:04:00 PM

Your nonet is well crafted, and conveys our helplessness in the face of death. I do hope your grief eases with time, my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/1/2023 11:11:00 AM

WoW! Victor, You penned a well-written poem about heartache and loss. The last portion of your poem was so sad and heartfelt. I hope that one day the pain of losing your wife will not hurt as much. Have a great day my friend-Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2023 7:37:00 AM

Heartfelt poem.. well done.. Hope you are feeling better my friend... Hugs and love

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2023 7:25:00 AM

It's always worse for those left behind and it can take a long time to get over it. An emotional write Victor. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2023 5:28:00 AM

So well written, Victor--shedding a few memory tears. Your ending lines spell the essence.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2023 3:26:00 AM

I have not lost a mate so I can in no way know what you are going through. This past weekend we had a young wife and mother to die at age 28 leaving a husband, a 2 1/2-year-old child and a 8-month-old child. I cannot imagine how hard this must be on all of them and the actual acceptance and dealing with all the emotions is still ahead. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2023 2:37:00 AM

- In the end... death will always win, Victor - A deep nonet - hugs