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November Sunrise- Three Choices

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A silence all pervading, nothing moves, the gentle hiss I hear is in my head like record stylus placed into the groove. Clouds form the upper circle overhead. Orchestra tunes up in the nearby trees, Blackbird and brace of Magpies, two for joy, blue safety curtain draws back by degrees a scarlet backdrop from the ground deploys. The star takes to the stage with no applause rising at the speed of summer flowers white whispy fingers climb as ground frost thaws, spotlights on cobwebs sparkle in the bower. Nature murmurs quietly in the wings new day, a new performance, Blackbird sings. For 'Three choices...' contest, sponsor Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2016 10:18:00 AM

Your choice from the five choices is an excellent one in my book..I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/19/2016 12:03:00 PM

Terrific sonnet Viv, congratulations...

Darren White

Date: 12/19/2016 1:57:00 AM

Love the 'white whispy fingers climb as ground frost thaws'. That is such beautiful imagery. And I love those very early mornings when I am alone and nature slowly wakes, I am an early bird. Congratulations :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/11/2016 8:19:00 AM

To me this is an exceptional sonnet. Such vivid imagery and smooth flowing stream in the depths of Nature's awesome landscapes. Adding to my fav list and this was a true pleasure to read my friend..

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/14/2016 12:55:00 AM

Thank you Robert, always a pleasure to hear from you. Regards, Viv

Jean Murray

Date: 11/19/2016 4:29:00 PM

There is so much to think about here. My favourite line is "like record stylus placed into the groove". Straight away I could hear it again. Let's dance!

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/19/2016 9:25:00 PM

You lead, Jean. Oh, and Wear boots with steel toecaps x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2016 7:23:00 PM

I was trying to think What are the three choices? And then I realized you were doing that contest of Sara's. Yes, I Have done that one too, just not posted it. I think you did it marvelously.

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/19/2016 9:26:00 PM

Thanks. Andrea, I'll watch out for yours x

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/16/2016 10:06:00 PM

Viv I loved the the imagery and descriptions of nature, a beautiful poem!

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/19/2016 9:27:00 PM

Cheers, Arthur. Regards, viv

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/16/2016 10:23:00 AM

Oh, this is beyond beautiful, Viv, simply outstanding:) sure to win:) a 10 from me:)

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/16/2016 9:14:00 AM

A beautiful sonnet Viv. I love it!

Paloma P

Date: 11/16/2016 7:10:00 AM

I adore anything Magpie, par excellence Viv. 'like record stylus placed into the groove', wish I would have thought of that. Good luck.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2016 3:43:00 AM

- A truly beautiful sonnet, Viv !! - A great choice for the contest ... a winning poem, I'm sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/16/2016 6:08:00 AM

Nearly as lovely as you, Anne-Lise. Takk, Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2016 3:36:00 AM

It's hard to find the words to say how beautiful this is Viv - you have a standing ovation from me BRAVO BRAVO:-) into my faves:-)

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/16/2016 6:07:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, we've had some lovely sunrises here in the past few days. I'm sure that, with your coastal backdrop, you haven't been outdone either. Viv x (thanks for the fave, too x)

White Wolf

Date: 11/16/2016 1:22:00 AM

This is really good, I love it!

Viv Wigley
Date: 11/16/2016 1:26:00 AM

Thank you, Rick glad you liked it. Regards, Viv