November

leaves lingered on the branch and paved the path transience held still the in-between ~November~ Autumn leaves

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/25/2023 4:41:00 PM

Congrats on such a well deserved 1st place win D, for a terrific Ninette.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/24/2023 1:24:00 PM

Nice!! Congratulations Di11y! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 3:20:00 PM

Appreciated, thank you x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Sara x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. On a lovely "November" write. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Paula, you too x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 7:50:00 PM

Gorgeous. One of the very best. Congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 1:29:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! What a lovely comment <3 I really enjoyed writing this, thank you for the introduction to the form x

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/23/2023 5:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Good Job ~ Ed

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 1:31:00 AM

Thanks Ed, I did love this poem so am delighted it has placed. Thank you for stopping by with a supportive comment, appreciated

John Lawless

Date: 11/8/2023 4:42:00 AM

Nicely done DD and the bookend words

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 5:04:00 AM

I've been quietly pleased about this one with no one to tell, so thank you for stopping by and noticing :) I don't always produce a pretty little poem that's on brief, I feel I should perhaps let Hallmark know I'm available :)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2023 1:25:00 AM

I love the opening lines the most, “leaves lingered on the branch “ beautiful ninette! Goodluck in the contest’s

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 1:35:00 AM

Thank you Ink - I was pleased I could finish on the same word but with a different meaning and it felt floaty like a leaf :) I might try this form again, I quite enjoyed it. Might have to play with homonyms again. I appreciate your comment x