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Nothing More Than a Pretty Smile - Repost

Nothing more than a pretty smile - repost There she was chasing a rabbit with 1 am coffeecakes and weak tea She didn’t notice I was watching from the branches of an olive tree A lone smile hidden amongst swirling smoke rings in a foreign accent To the gazebo she ran with its straw grass tables and pleated cushions in hibiscus print fabric no one would sit on My eyes followed her as she darted around manicured boxwoods and cherub statues spitting water onto sleeping lily pads, following the same schedule as the other…identical She came upon a dandelion and asked politely, “Pardon me, but have you seen a…” The weed interrupted, “Didn’t…don’t do drama dreams dancing deliriously down donut distracted ditches” “That’s dumb” she replied with a giggle and a snort This must be her fun, I think, trying to catch a white ball of fur, big, then small, then smaller still like a thimble seeking a thread, when now she is stopped in her ziggy zagging tracks by a June bug singing, “I see, I see, in front of me Dessert, dessert, set out for free A chocolate pie, a chocolate pie in menus written on the sky” Perplexed she climbed upon its back and flew, holding onto red leather shoulder pads with black dots changing shapes, ducking winged arches that covered the vestibule they soared through when a sharp turn pitched her to the opposite side… Landing with a thud, her new dress now soiled between the wrinkles in time that had ticked away on a clock faced sun named Ray She cried carrot tears, orange sherbet streams on peach tone cheeks, marmalade miseries and mango miscues piddling on her patent leather shoes, ready to give up When it appeared, hopping happily Jumping into her lap and licking her face She caressed its fur, removing sticker burs and scratching just the right spot, as its right rear leg thumped with joy Then lifting the bundled bunny to her face, she kissed it tenderly with wild cherry gloss lips, or should I say…kissed me for you see, all along, it was me And you thought I was nothing more than a pretty smile….. Note: This is a repost of a poem I posted on soup when I first arrived. Not many saw it at the time. I read an Alice in Wonderland themed poem by Kim Rodrigues the other day titled “Personalities of Alice” https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/personalities_of_alice_899442, which was absolutely wonderful, and it reminded me of this so I thought I would bring it up again and see if you liked it.

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Date: 5/17/2017 3:04:00 PM
This poetic trip though Alice's looking glass, is thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a fun poem offering a look at the sights inside the imagination of the poet's mind. Emile. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 5/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Emile. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 5/16/2017 10:26:00 AM
So much fun, Chris! Saved as fave, my friend! Wonderful "curious" images and speech!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 5/16/2017 9:09:00 AM
I can re-read this poem another hundred times..I never tire of that snowball fur or furry bunny :).Ofcourse that is because I feel so much Alice in Wonderland...No wonder I wonder a lot.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:29:00 AM
A hundred times??? I'll bet your eyes would be tired after that. :) Thank you so very much Charmaine.
Date: 5/16/2017 7:34:00 AM
May this Cheshire cat trickster smile you cleverly ended with remain upon you for many many more moons Chris. This was delectably delightful from start to finish and I am thrilled you reposted it:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie for your kind words. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 5/16/2017 6:21:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. I love the concept of Alice in Wonderland. The Tea Party the Unbirthday celebration. The all of it. You paid tribute to Kim and to The Wonderland. Well done in its entirety. Have a great morning.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 5/15/2017 1:56:00 PM
"1 am coffeecakes and weak tea", "Didn’t…don’t do drama dreams // dancing deliriously down // donut distracted ditches” That's simply wonderful :) I can imagine why it reminds you of Kim's poem. It's just..... I never knew you were a bundled bunny! I'm glad you're more than a pretty smile ;) I fave this because I love it.
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Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 1:43:00 AM
I can say the same about you. I am always glad when it's Monday and you are back from your weekend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren. I can always count on you my friend. Soup would just be hot water without you.

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