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Nothing More Than a Pretty Smile - Repost

Nothing more than a pretty smile - repost

There she was chasing a rabbit 
with 1 am coffeecakes and weak tea
She didn’t notice I was watching
from the branches of an olive tree
A lone smile hidden amongst
swirling smoke rings in a foreign accent

To the gazebo she ran
with its straw grass tables
and pleated cushions in hibiscus 
print fabric no one would sit on

My eyes followed her as she
darted around manicured boxwoods
and cherub statues spitting water
onto sleeping lily pads,
following the same schedule
as the other…identical

She came upon a dandelion 
and asked politely, “Pardon me,
but have you seen a…”
The weed interrupted, 
“Didn’t…don’t do drama dreams
dancing deliriously down
donut distracted ditches”
“That’s dumb” she replied
with a giggle and a snort 

This must be her fun, I think, 
trying to catch a white ball of fur, 
big, then small,
then smaller still like a 
thimble seeking a thread,
when now she is stopped 
in her ziggy zagging tracks 
by a June bug singing, 

“I see, I see, in front of me
Dessert, dessert, set out for free
A chocolate pie, a chocolate pie
in menus written on the sky”

Perplexed she climbed upon its back
and flew, holding onto 
red leather shoulder pads 
with black dots changing shapes, 
ducking winged arches that 
covered the vestibule they 
soared through when a sharp turn 
pitched her to the opposite side…

Landing with a thud, 
her new dress now soiled
between the wrinkles in time
that had ticked away
on a clock faced sun named Ray

She cried carrot tears, 
orange sherbet streams
on peach tone cheeks, 
marmalade miseries
and mango miscues
piddling on her patent leather shoes,
ready to give up

When it appeared, hopping happily
Jumping into her lap 
and licking her face
She caressed its fur, removing 
sticker burs and scratching 
just the right spot, as its right rear leg 
thumped with joy

Then lifting the bundled bunny 
to her face, she kissed it tenderly 
with wild cherry gloss lips, 
or should I say…kissed me
for you see, all along, it was me

And you thought I was nothing more than a pretty smile…..



Note: This is a repost of a poem I posted on soup when I first arrived. Not many saw it at the time. I read an Alice in Wonderland themed poem by Kim Rodrigues the other day titled “Personalities of Alice” https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/personalities_of_alice_899442, 
which was absolutely wonderful, and it reminded me of this so I thought I would bring it up again and see if you liked it.

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Date: 5/17/2017 3:04:00 PM
This poetic trip though Alice's looking glass, is thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a fun poem offering a look at the sights inside the imagination of the poet's mind. Emile. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 5/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Emile. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 5/16/2017 10:26:00 AM
So much fun, Chris! Saved as fave, my friend! Wonderful "curious" images and speech!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 5/16/2017 9:09:00 AM
I can re-read this poem another hundred times..I never tire of that snowball fur or furry bunny :).Ofcourse that is because I feel so much Alice in Wonderland...No wonder I wonder a lot.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:29:00 AM
A hundred times??? I'll bet your eyes would be tired after that. :) Thank you so very much Charmaine.
Date: 5/16/2017 7:34:00 AM
May this Cheshire cat trickster smile you cleverly ended with remain upon you for many many more moons Chris. This was delectably delightful from start to finish and I am thrilled you reposted it:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie for your kind words. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 5/16/2017 6:21:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. I love the concept of Alice in Wonderland. The Tea Party the Unbirthday celebration. The all of it. You paid tribute to Kim and to The Wonderland. Well done in its entirety. Have a great morning.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 5/15/2017 1:56:00 PM
"1 am coffeecakes and weak tea", "Didn’t…don’t do drama dreams // dancing deliriously down // donut distracted ditches” That's simply wonderful :) I can imagine why it reminds you of Kim's poem. It's just..... I never knew you were a bundled bunny! I'm glad you're more than a pretty smile ;) I fave this because I love it.
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Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 1:43:00 AM
I can say the same about you. I am always glad when it's Monday and you are back from your weekend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren. I can always count on you my friend. Soup would just be hot water without you.

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